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Birthday - Part VII

Monday, November 13, 2006

Hank needs a doctor, and the only one they've got is lying dead on the cargo bay floor ... Feedback, as always, is welcome and needed!

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“What’s going on?” Smith said, stepping down into the cargo bay from the common area. Then he saw his man on the floor. “Lee?”

“Yeah.” Mal looked apologetic. “My fault.”

Smith’s eyes widened. “You shot him?”

“No. But it’s still my fault he’s dead.” He pushed Smith out of the way. “Best be moving yourself, got a man needs help here.”

Simon was leaning on the doorway to the infirmary. “I heard a gunshot,” he said, holding onto the wall.

“Lee’s dead,” Zoe said quickly, carrying Hank past him.

“He’s …” Simon couldn’t focus on the words.

“It’s up to you,” Mal said.

“Mal, I …”

“We don’t have a choice. Hank needs a doc, fast, and you’re it.”

Simon looked down at his hands, the weaves on the cuts from his nails in his palms, the slight tremor in his muscles. “I’ll need help.”

“You got it.”

“Dope him.”

Mal nodded and loaded a hypo. As he passed it to Zoe, Freya ran into the infirmary.

“How is he?” she asked, glancing at Hank as he slipped into unconsciousness.

“Simon’s going to …” Mal glanced across at the young man, pulling on a pair of gloves. “I don’t know, Frey.”

“What happened to Lee?” She glanced over her shoulder. “I saw …”

“My fault,” Mal admitted. “I should have made sure the man I hit was down.”

“Mal …”

The captain of Serenity shook his head. Nothing she could say was going to help, not right now. “Frey, Hank didn’t have time to figure out where the shuttle went. Can you see what you can do?”

Freya nodded. “I’ll get right onto it.” She put her hand on his arm and squeezed gently. “Be right back,” she said, then strode back towards the Artemis.

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Simon picked up the extractor, leaning forward to start probing the wound, then paused, trying to breathe deeply, to control the turmoil inside him.

Zoe looked at him, his face paler than usual, the tremble in his hand. “Simon,” she said quietly. “You are going to do this right. If you let him die, I will kill you myself. Dong mah ?”

Simon stared into her dark eyes.

Comments
Monday, 13 November 2006 12:53
Man, with the way things were going, was half expecting Simon to pass out during that surgery on Hank...something tells me that if that happened, Zoe wouldn't let Simon live to see Fathers Day...

Typical Simon, to try and be selfless by leaving...gorram fool sometimes.
Then to find out that he's lasted so much longer than he even thought possible...very nice.

And damnit! Let's get River back, although with what Mitchell Lon has apparently done to her, something tells me that could be a very, very dangerous proposition.

Again, I'm loving this series. so keep it up!
Monday, 13 November 2006 14:41
Oh my God, I really thought Simon wasn't going to budge on staying on board ... please tell me there will be a great, mushy, lovey-dovey reunion between Simon, Kaylee and Bethany right at the beginning of the next chapter? Please, I need closure, I need Simon to hug Kaylee and say hello to his little girl!

Oh, and I need the rest of the crew to get River back ... hurry!
Monday, 13 November 2006 17:26
Damn...that was a mighty crazy chapter, Jane0904! Especially with Simon's temporary mental shutdown and refusal to seek comfort from Kaylee and Bethany, since that is more telling of his fragile condition than him fighting to stay functional while patching Hank up:(

Mighty glad you got Mal to talk some sense into Simon. Especially impressed that you had Mal actually think to use Simon's clinical abilities to recognize the stuff they were pumping him with and how long a person was expected to last so he could inform Simon he surpassed the limites by 200%. Though I can't imagine what Mal would have done had Simon told him the breakdown comes at hour 15 of the torture...

BEB
Monday, 13 November 2006 20:30
Oh, this is just gripping! Love it to bits and can't wait for the crew to find River and for Simon to put right what that twisted *tamade hundan* did to her. Really liked the way Mal drew Simon back from the edge, from a very dark place back into the light. Would have been heartbreaking if he really had left Kaylee and Bethany. Ali D :~)
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