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Sly III

Saturday, November 11, 2006

Simon wants to be a man ... Please be gentle, as this is my first NC17 fanfic ... but enjoy!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3641    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Simon walked through the common area towards their room, his heart beating wildly in his chest. What was he doing? For that matter, what was Kaylee doing? He’d told her to strip naked, wait for him, but what if she’d thought better of it? Maybe thought he was being too pushy, trying to be something he wasn't … He paused at the entrance to the room. What if she wasn't there?

He slid open the door.

There she was, lying on their bed, her head on the pillow. Her hands were making little pyramids of the sheet beneath her, and her toes were curling and uncurling, her feet rubbing together. And between, her bare flesh was glowing in the light, scorching him. Already her nipples were hard peaks, tipped strawberry.

“Thought you weren't coming,” she complained, smiling at him.

“Hush,” he said, stepping inside and closing the door behind him. “You’re not to speak. Not until I tell you.”

“But I –“

He put a finger to his lips. “Quiet.”

She closed her mouth and looked at him with shining eyes. She wriggled slightly, making her breasts move.

“Lie still,” he ordered. No, he couldn’t do this if she was gazing at him like that. He’d never be able to control himself if he could drown in those eyes. He pulled open one of the drawers and found what he was looking for. Turning back he ran the silk scarf he’d bought her for her last birthday through his fingers, and Kaylee trembled.

He leaned over her, careful not to touch her, not yet, and wrapped the scarf around her head, her eyes well covered, but leaving just one layer over her mouth. Lifting the layer to make sure she was going to be able to breathe, he leaned a little closer and touched her lips with his. Her head lifted, trying to prolong the kiss, her tongue reaching for his, but he pulled back.

“Simon …” she said.

This time he touched her lips with his finger. “No. You don’t talk. Or I’ll go away. Understand?”

She nodded, a little stiffly, and lay back.

“There are rules,” Simon went on. “My rules. You are t

Comments
Saturday, 11 November 2006 18:57
Way to wipe out one image with something blindingly erotic and physical! Did it just get hot in here? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 11 November 2006 18:59
Holy...

I mean...

Oh my...

*THUD*

*wibble*


You SURE that's your first NC-17? Holy hotness...
Saturday, 11 November 2006 23:08
Sweet and gentle Jesus that was HOT! If this is your first attempt, Jane0904...I can't properly fathom what you could come up with given time and practice:D

BEB
Sunday, 12 November 2006 03:44
Oh my, my, my, my ... that was so hot smut! Thank you so much for taking the plunge and writing it for us!

I loved it ... of course, now that you've done it once, we will be expecting it again!
Sunday, 12 November 2006 06:42
*There are no words entering BornToFly's brain, because it is still recovering*

Five minutes later...

...Wow!

"Please be gentle, as this is my first NC17 fanfic"
After reading this, something tells me that you need not worry, because this was...well, it was...it was damn hot, and that's all there is to it.
Sunday, 12 November 2006 18:55
I can't speak for anyone else, but......

I'll be in my bunk!

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