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Mischief, Part 3

Friday, November 10, 2006

Yet another Pirate Children story. Set thirteen years post-BDM, AU. A look into daily life for the children aboard Serenity. How do four children pass the time in the Black?

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Title: Mischief

Rating: PG. For mischief and a little cursin'. Shh, don't repeat that in front of Mei-Mei.

Characters: the whole crew, plus the Pirate Children and Alistair Caramia (the latter are mine, the rest are Joss's)

Pairings: Canon pairings. I generally lean towards M/I, but this one is not as shippery as Shadow or any of the others. This is more about the kids.

Summary: Yet another Pirate Children story. Set thirteen years post-BDM, AU. A look into daily life for the children aboard Serenity. How do four children pass the time in the Black?

Author's Note: The silliness has taken on a life of its own. (Though there is a moment of seriousness which explores River and Abe, as Kaynara as so often requested. ;))

Part 3

A squeal and then running footsteps on the catwalks, one set light, one a little heavier. The shuttle door slides open.

“Bubba!”

There’s more giggling as Serra and Abram appear in the middle of the shuttle, Serra upside down in Abe’s arms.

“Hi, Mama,” Serra grins, her twin braids hanging below her head, the purple teddy-bear on her belly smiling upside down as well. “He caught me.”

“Abe, please put your sister down before you drop her,” Inara says with a light smile, seated at Mal’s desk going over the books. She has yet to change out of her nightclothes either, but wears a long robe to keep off the slight chill of Serenity.

“Aw, Mama, you’re no fun,” Abe teases as he does as he’s told. Both children move to kiss her. “Good morning. We came to get you for breakfast.”

“Daddy sent us to get your lazy butt out of bed,” Serra chimes in, obviously quoting. Then she giggles and sings mischievously: “But he didn’t say butt.”

Abe grins as well, running a hand through his unruly hair, lighter and less curly than his sister’s.

The ship rocks suddenly, pitching the children onto the floor in a pile of bones.

“Ow! Bubba! That’s my hand.”

“Your knee’s in my stomach, Mei-Mei.”

“Sorry!”

“Are you two okay?” Inara asks, watching the pair disentangle from each other. She mov

Comments
EPM0001
Friday, 10 November 2006 22:01
Simply wonderful. You have created a great little Firefly 'verse of your own. Thanks for sharing.
Saturday, 11 November 2006 01:31
This is just great ... I've run out ways to describe how awesome this is. It's fun and cute and sweet and makes me feel all warm and fuzzy!

Abram sharing River's nightmares is a really interesting touch. I would have assumed Lolly would, because she's related to River, but ... I think it still works with Abram as he is obviously sensitive.

Really shiny all the way around!
Saturday, 11 November 2006 07:17
ooo this one was not all light and fluffy. the visit from the purple-bellies, while amusing (i love serra's: “Bye! Thanks for coming!”) reminds us that this is not a game. Mal's verse is as always hazardous, and now there are children involved. it's interesting to see how they've all adapted to this life, but it's a little scary too.

loved the abe/river stuff--thanks so much for writing it! i'm glad that you brought kacey in on the secret--makes perfect sense that he would know, as he and abe share a room. i think abe is the logical child to bond with river. mal and river always had a special relationship, and abe certainly has a lot of his father in him. but abe is also inara's child, and she's especially gifted when it comes to empathy and compassion. looking forward to seeing where you take this!
Saturday, 11 November 2006 07:20
I absolutely loved the boarding of the obnoxious purplebellies and how Mal and the children flumoxed them so much they left. Bless mei mei, she really is a natural. A bit ominous having poor Abe pick up River's nightmares, wonder if the mentioning of it is to prepare the way for further revelations? Very shiny as ever, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 11 November 2006 13:36
hey there!!
so i've spent most fo the afternoon reading all your Pirate Children stories. i really love them!!! i love the characterisation you've given each of the children, having aspects of all the crew members in them, showing the effect a social environment can have on a child.
sorry, i've got to learn not to be so analytical.
once you've finished this story, i'd like to make a special fan request. i'd really love to see a one-shot (or series, if you really want to) about Lolly, showing what it's like to have Kaylee as a mother. Kaylee is one of my favourite characters, mostly because of the innocence she carries, and i'dlove to see how the child of such a person would consider their mother.
anyway, just a bit of an idea if you feel like it. you could even just incorporate it into this story if you'd like. just a little something to show the relationships not only between the Reynolds children and their parents, but the others as well.
an there i go geting all analytical on ya!! Sorry!!!!!
Can't wait to read more about our favourite pirate children
No Power in the Verse
-Fred
Saturday, 11 November 2006 13:38
btw, i'd live to know what incident sparked that fantastic "With clothes on, preferably, Jayne." comment. i neraly killed mysef laughing!!!
-Fred
Saturday, 11 November 2006 20:35
Wow...that was mighty interestin' stuff you had going here, AWindsor. Especially the revelation that River inadvertantly dumps part of her nightmares into Abram's head when she's sleeping and having a bad night:(

And I too wanna see - even in flashback or described reference - what the incident was to warrant the comment to Jayne to ensure he was dressed;D

BEB

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