Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA

Erection

Tuesday, November 7, 2006

Kaylee tells Simon an embarrassing story. Rated R for discussions of intimate acts.

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Yeah, yeah, its been a long time since I posted anything. I've got a few of these little fics written but I've been so busy lately that I'm just getting around to posting another one now.

After Flan things will slow down for me - I hope, and I'll be able to finish the long story I'm 70 pages into at the moment.

For those of you going to Flan, well, you'll see what has been taking up all my time when you walk in the door.

This fic is from a prompt table that I've been slowly working on and takes place between the end of the series and the movie.

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31.Erection

“So tell me another story,” Simon prodded with a grin.

They once again, as had become customary since just before he’d been shot, were sitting on the couch, his injured leg propped up by a pillow and resting on the table in front of them. Kaylee’s legs were once again in his lap, and he was absently rubbing the soft skin with his fingers.

“I think it’s your turn.” Kaylee crossed her arms.

Simon simply laughed. “No, you’ve heard all of my MedAcad stories, I think you owe me an embarrassing one this time.”

Kaylee pouted and Simon had to resist the urge to lean over and kiss it right off her face. They’d been growing closer, but that didn’t mean that he’d had the courage yet to tell her that he really liked her, that he wanted to take their ‘friendship’ to another level entirely. And then there was River to consider. Could he really split his attention?

Kaylee thought for a moment before a wide, happy smile spread across her face. “Okay, this is embarrassing ‘nuff.”

Simon sank back into the couch, hands still resting and absently brushing across her ankles, as she leaned back and began her tale.

“Well, when I was real little, maybe 7 or 8, we had all kinds of animals around the house. Cats, cause we couldn’t ever catch ‘em, dogs ‘cause they was good at scarin’ away all the ‘coons –“

“Racoons?” Simon asked with a raised eyebrow. He’d never seen one except in a zoo and in books.

“Yeah, little mo

Comments
Tuesday, 07 November 2006 16:35
As always, you're the best. I like the imagry of Kaylee a a child, and of Simon's discomfort at her lack of inhibitions. I look fporward to your next...

Till later.
Tuesday, 07 November 2006 17:00
LOVE IT! I haven't read this in so long and I'm so glad you posted it. Poor Simon ... just when things are going good and then he sticks his foot in it - AGAIN! But I love all of it, especially his plea with her at the end. It's great!
Tuesday, 07 November 2006 21:19
Great to see you posting again and this story didn't disappoint. Left me feeling sorry for Simon, so torn by competing loyalties and hampered by his inability to say exactly what he wants. But nice to see he is progressing. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 08 November 2006 01:49
>Kaylee’s eyes swept down his face to his chest and Simon got the distinct feeling that her intelligent mind was counting the ways she could take him apart right about now.<
Loved that line!
And Simon's promise at the end, perfect for him! Great job!
Wednesday, 08 November 2006 03:24
I love the ending, very sweet.
Thursday, 09 November 2006 03:50
aw, this was fun. lucky kaylee getting to make simon all hot and bothered.
Thursday, 09 November 2006 06:56
Oh...I so could see Simon slowly getting more and more embarrassed as Kaylee regaled him with her tale of watching her teenage cousin getting funky with his girlfriend as her first taste of intimacy. Only thing better would have been a spit take from Simon when Kaylee says “Well, I was bein’ all quiet when I saw the little hussy drop to her knees and unhook his pants" ;D

And to quote Mr. Universe: bring it on, bring it on! Nothing says Browncoat fun like a tale from Leiasky:D

BEB
ELLAGREGGS
Monday, 19 April 2010 17:36
I liked this very much. It captured the awkward yet sweet dynamic between Simon and Kaylee very well. The story Kaylee told was great, too. I can totally see that happening on her daddy's farm, in her daddy's garage. I really like how Simon has these moments of "Uh-huh" in his head while she's telling the story. And that Kaylee's going to hold him to his promise. Very sweet. Nice job.

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