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Birthday - Part II

Tuesday, November 7, 2006

Second in a multi-parter. Simon and River have been kidnapped, and Kaylee is in pain ... My muse thanks you for your feedback! Oh, and it might help to read EBB & FLOW ...

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Kaylee groaned. “Oh, Cap’n,” she whimpered, grabbing his hand and squeezing tight as a wave of pain shot through her.

“Kaylee?” Mal watched her fight it, then looked up. “We need a doctor!” he said, scanning the crowd.

“We ain’t got one,” the man who had spoken before said apologetically. “Ours got took by sickness last winter, and there ain’t been anyone around since then.”

Mal glared at him then gathered Kaylee into his arms, managing to get awkwardly to his feet. “Don’t worry, mei-mei ,” he said to her as she held him tightly. “I’ll get him back.”

He carried her to Serenity, ignoring the looks from all the people they passed. As the Firefly came into view Freya ran ahead.

“What’s going on?” Hank asked, looking out of the cargo bay doors, then saw what Mal was carrying. “ Tzao gao .”

“Go get Zoe and Jayne, now,” Freya said firmly.

Hank nodded and ran off, passing Mal carrying Kaylee, and pausing only a moment to look at her face before running even faster.

“Freya?” Inara looked down from the catwalk.

“I’m going to need your help.”

“What is it?” Inara asked, then her face turned white as Mal stepped up the ramp. “Kaylee!” She ran down the stairs as Mal carried the mechanic through into the infirmary.

“I think she’s in labour,” he said as he laid her tenderly onto the medbed. “We need a doctor.”

“Soon as they get back we’ll be gone,” Freya said, starting to undo Kaylee’s clothes.

Mal stopped her with a hand on her arm. “Let Inara do that,” he said, pulling her gently out of the door. “Frey, you ever birthed a baby?”

She shook her head. “Nope. You?”

“Foals, calves, yeah, back on the ranch,” he admitted. “But generally that was just a case of watching and waiting. I never helped deliver a baby before.”

“Inara helped with Petaline’s baby,” Freya pointed out.

“She told you about that?” Mal asked, distracted for a moment.

“And about Nandi.” She put her hand on his arm. “But that’s a conversation for another time, don’t you think?”

Comments
Tuesday, 07 November 2006 10:44
Ooops, now we see the face of his captor! Loved that both Kaylee and little Bethany are going to be okay. Wonder if Smith will help Mal track down those *tamade hundan*. Can't wait for the next part. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 07 November 2006 11:57
Eric Lon? Well I'll be a son of a mother!

Way to go Smithy! Just in the nick of time too!

I loved the breaks in the surgery, it was really well edited, and the it was so well conceived, it made it that much more believeable.

Man, I can't wait to see what happens to Simon and River, but that little voice inside my head tells me it simply cannot be any kind of good. And dammit! Simon should have been there to birth his daughter...speaking of which, Bethany- perfect.
Tuesday, 07 November 2006 16:52
Yeah for the baby and mother making it all right! I wonder if any of the fetal distress was caused by Kaylee's time on Tetris or just from the breech birth?

Anyway, not important ... but you have to get Simon and River back now or Kaylee's post-partum depression is going to sink the ship with all her tears!
Tuesday, 07 November 2006 17:08
Aww, Simon wasn't there for the birth of his baby. So sad. I like all the angst, though!
Thursday, 09 November 2006 02:29
Wonder if this is part of larger trend, with Simon missing out on his first child's birth? Cuz this is at least the second tale where Simon gets kidnapped before the birth of his child and the crew's gotta rescue him:(

Still...all kinds of impressed right now, Jane0904! Especially over how deftly you handled the medical scenes, cuz they were realistic in their pacing and plot structure;D

BEB
Friday, 10 November 2006 06:04
Cool stuff eh. once again you capture the characters perfectly.

Great pacing and real tension while not sacrificing the plot of the story.

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