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Forging Jayne (2) : To Walk In Light

Tuesday, November 7, 2006

Everyman's history begins before his life. This is Jayne's history. You have to read "A Good Boy" first, or this will make no kind of sense at all!!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1390    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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To Walk In Light

Quiet.

Intense.

Stable.

None of these could really be applied to Lily. She was kind and friendly. The perfect typical girl next door. All fresh air and blue eyes, chocolaty curls and sunshine crooked grin. Never one for temper tantrums or mean spiritedness. She sat humbly in church beside her brother, parents and Nana, honestly thinking on the well being of others. Given to random fits of kindness towards humanity in general. Skipping along through childhood, into those heart quickening teen years, surrounding herself with brightness in all forms.

Doran took her at 15.

In just under 6 hours, Doran changed Lily’s world. Brutally turned and churned all the goodness she had around her and spilt it out again as so much dark waste.

Lily didn’t change so much. She became more quiet, less open. It was a failure to her soul to dwell on fear and anger. Tried desperately to push back the gathering thunderheads around her. She felt the stares, saw the pity reflected from face to face to face, like so many well-placed mirrors. She turned from them all… except two.

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Ethan was quiet, intense, stable. He had actually carried Lily most of the way back to town, covering himself in stains of pain and tears, talking quietly about the friend he once had. As they approached the town, he set her down and helped her adjust the coat that fell nearly to her knees.

“You okay, Lily? You oughta walk from here, if you can. Folk need to know you’re okay, you know? If they see you walkin’ chances are they call out to you, not run on up to check and see if you’re breathing if I’m carryin’ you…just…you know?” Ethan stared directly at her as he spoke and hoped to God he was making some kind of sense.

Lily simply nodded and set her lips grimly. She thought he meant to let her walk home on her own. She was none but surprised when he draped an arm companionably around her shoulder and pressured her forward.

The streets were dark, but they noticed a crowd gathered i

Comments
Tuesday, 07 November 2006 06:32
That was breaking my heart in so many different ways...then it was revealed she's pregnant, and darnit if my ticker didn't skip a beat.

I think it's very poignant that Lily finds the honesty of Ethan and her Nana the most comforting, not the pitying stares and hushed voices that don't know how to look or what to say. It shows her strength, and her need to feel real and normal again.

Can't say I like where this has gone (rape isn't exactly the most popular of subjects), but I am intruiged by the story you're weaving, and would gladly read more, so bring it on!
Tuesday, 07 November 2006 11:28
Oh poor Lily! She's very brave, keeping her head up and not hating a child born out of an act of violence.
Sure she'll get a big surprise when the "big, chubby beautiful girl, with curls and roses for cheeks" will turn into a very manly and name complexed mercenary!!!
Thursday, 09 November 2006 02:10
Certainly explains why our favourite merc got saddle with the moniker "Jayne" rather than something else. Also explains why Jayne probably had a hell of childhood...a daughter produced through Doran's heinous act could be loved and shielded from the past. But a son? Oh, how the Scriptures screwed Jayne over with the whole "crimes of the father..." concept:(

BEB
Thursday, 09 November 2006 14:42
Very deep, and your writing is solid. I'm looking forward to the next installment. Let me know if you ever need a beta (though it doesn't look like you do).

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