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Shadow, Part 5

Monday, November 6, 2006

A Pirate Children story. Final part of Mal's return home.

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Title: Shadow

Rating: PG. "So there /is/ kissin'..."

Characters: the whole crew, plus toddlers Kacey and Lolly, Baby Abey, the Reynolds-Stokes clan

Pairings: Heavy on the M/I, trying not to neglect the rest of canon (S/K, Z/W, J/Vera)

Summary: Set 4 years post-BDM, Mal and the crew have a job on Shadow.

Author's Note: I had so much fun writing this one. I have a cousin who is currently about Baby Abey's age, so he's really the inspiration for everything Abram does. So this is also dedicated to him. This is the end of this story, but there are more to come. Serra will be returning soon, I promise. :)

Part 5

“Can’t believe he went back there,” Laney sighs, pulling out a chair from the kitchen table and beckoning for Mal to sit as well.

“Sam Wilkins was just a young kid, a wanderer. Signed onto the ranch just ‘bout the time your grandparents got sick. Jack’s age, eighteen. Took a shining to our Maggie immediately, and why shouldn’t he? Pretty little thing of sixteen, iron-willed, bright smiled. Jack caught ‘em in the hayloft a couple ‘a times, innocent kid stuff. Then Ma and Pa died, and Maggie lost it, held onto Sam for all she was worth, ‘cause he was the only one not gone or mournin’ left in her life, ‘cause he let her forget, I figure. Their relationship weren’t exactly healthy, but we were all so lost at the time, them dying three weeks apart, and me only twenty. The next year I married Silas. Just wanted to leave the ranch, leave the memories. Boys came too. Your mother pitched a mighty fit. I know you don’t think that’s possible, but she could throw ‘em fierce. She refused to come here, so I dragged her. She went running right back after a few months, back to the ranch, to Sam. I guess she relied on him to keep her sanity.”

Laney pauses, studies her nephew’s face. It’s a mask, not revealing anything, which says so much in itself.

“They fought all the time, over the ranch, over Sam’s wanderlust. Killed him to stay in one place so long. I figure he never meant to start anythin’ r

Comments
Monday, 06 November 2006 03:49
Yay! I love Pirate Children ... and I love this explanation of Mal's father. It's one of those imponderables that I've thought on, but never really tackled.

I can't wait to read more PC stories ...
Monday, 06 November 2006 05:21
"She finishes rearranging and crawls onto the bed beside them, lying down at Mal’s side, head against his shoulder. Abe’s eyes are drooping, lashes fluttering against his round baby cheeks, his teething slowing until his jaw eventually goes slack with sleep."

i love this picture of the three of them, so content with one another. it's really beautiful.

like tamsibling, i enjoyed your exploration of mal's past, and the father he never knew. i like how you handled it--that everything didnt turn out pretty and neat, but mal's okay and content in the life he has. thanks!
Monday, 06 November 2006 05:25
Damnit! I thought I knew where you were going to go with Mal's father...how wrong I was. Your version is better anyways.

I think it's great that the crew have such a family vibe, as it brings everything together more fluidly, and for Mal to have such a place of loving to retreat to...can't be nothing but good.
Monday, 06 November 2006 10:01
Loved this and it feels really good that Mal has so much family back on Shadow as well as the family he has made on Serenity. I liked Laney so much, so full of common sense and wise knowing where her nephew is concerned and I love seeing how Mal, Inara and Abe are so happy and content with each other. And Abe only settling down when his daddy took him, teething on his little finger and Inara saying she had tried that, so natural. I have a feeling Serenity will be making a yearly trip to Shadow from now on and this time the painful ghosts of Mal's past will be superceded by the warmth of the family he still has on Shadow. Ali D :~)
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Monday, 06 November 2006 18:31
This was a wonderful story....thanks for sharing!
Wednesday, 08 November 2006 05:20
Mighty beautiful stuff here, AWindsor...even the seemingly loose end of Mal's father being alive somewhere in the 'Verse;)

I am glad Mal was given a chance to reconnect with his relatives, since most of us Browncoats wanna make Mal like Princess Leia: an cultural orphan due to their home planet being destroyed...but this is great scenario building:)

BEB

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