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U-Day

Sunday, November 5, 2006

Another Unification Day rolls around, and Mal goes into this bar ... Just a little fiction while I work on my next longer story, so just be gentle with me - and leave feedback!

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The game was progressing well. Each player had made move, counter move, feint and counter feint. Zoe, her usual face as inscrutable as ever, lifted a piece and jumped three others.

“Good move,” Freya nodded approvingly. She reached out, shook her arm slightly, then made her own move, ending up on the other side of the board, and the winner.

“How …?” Zoe stared at the board.

“She is very good,” Mal said. “Sometimes she even beats me.”

Freya lifted an eyebrow at him, but forbore to comment. Mal, a grin plastered across his face, stood up and straightened his brown coat, saying, “Right. Well, I'm going to do what a man’s gotta do.” He stepped behind Zoe then leaned down. “You two ladies play nicely, now.” He headed off towards a door in the corner.

Freya watched him, then looked around the bar before saying, “Does it ever seem to you that we spend all our lives in places like this?”

“Sometimes it does.” Zoe glanced towards where Mal had disappeared. "How are things between you two?" she asked.

Freya smiled a little. "Shiny. Good. They're improving." She laughed sadly. "Takes time, Zoe."

"I know." They looked at each other in total understanding before Freya felt somewhat embarrassed at the first mate’s frank gaze and looked away.

“Any idea why those fellers at the bar should be staring as us?” she asked. “Apart from the fact that we are two fine specimens of female womanhood, of course.”

“Apart from that,” Zoe agreed. “Well, do you know what day it is?”

Freya considered. “Tuesday?”

“I meant specifically.”

“Nope. No idea. Is it significant?”

“Did the captain ask you to wear that coat?”

“Wha …?” Freya was surprised at the apparent non-sequitur, but glanced down at her own brown coat. “No. Not really. But he seemed kinda pleased.”

“Then you won’t be surprised when there’s a brawl.”

Freya leaned forward. “Am I missing something here?”

“It’s Unification Day.”

Light dawned on Freya’s face. “And this is an Alliance moon. And we’re wearing

Comments
Monday, 06 November 2006 01:15
OMG - I loved this! Your Wash/Zoe conversation/hallucination was heartbreaking, but absolutely perfect.

And Freya, god do I love her ...

>You know, if they don't kill him, I might.

Bwhahaha!

And of course, River, dear sweet, addle-brained River who literally sees dead people ... love her too ... now I want to see the fic where Zoe finally lets Hank kiss her ... that poor man needs to at least have a shot!
Monday, 06 November 2006 03:19
And about time too! Zoe finally stops hating Hank, and even though it took Wash to make her do it (which was perfect, by the way), it's damn good to see it happen...but alas, things never go smooth on Serenity, so I can't help but sense that Hank is in for a tough time yet!

As for Mal and Freya, sometimes I really think Mal needs his mischief prone ass kicked. Not telling Freya it was U-Day...so very sly on Mal's part.
Monday, 06 November 2006 09:46
This was wonderful but what in the name of Buddha was Mal thinking telling Freya to wear her browncoat in an Alliance friendly bar on U-Day? Very silly and sneaky of him but I just loved it anyway. The sort of stupid backward heroics that only make sense after the concussion of a bar fight fades. Just loved Freya and Zoe in this and felt quite emotional with the scenes between Zoe and Wash but so damn happy she came back. As for Hank, I think he has a shot now that Wash has given his lambie-toes his blessing. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 08 November 2006 01:41
Always wondered when one of the Trio would get injured enough that the annual U-Day barfight would get canned ever after...not really surprised it's Zoe here:(

Still...this was a fabulous chapter you got here, Jane0904! Definitely loved the Wash/Zoe schtick...cuz nothing beats Wash and Zoe when they are riffing off one another (see Wash's "corpsifying and gross monologue" from the series). That and Freya once again acting surprised Mal would pull something like not tell her it was U-Day...cuz it's just hilariously absurd to think she would be unaware of Mal's prediliction towards taking vengeance on Alliance supporters on U-Day;)

BEB

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