Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Blackout (Pt 3)

Sunday, November 5, 2006

Set on New Melbourne, a hitman of sorts, employed by crimelord Niska is assigned his next target. Please read parts 1 and 2 if you like! (NC-17) And please please please add comments :)

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2012    RATING: 10.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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THIS STORY IS NOT SUITABLE FOR CHILDREN UNDER 17. It contains scenes of sexual assult and graphic violence. DO NOT READ ON if this upsets you.

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Blackout

Part 3

It remains night over Presaria City.

Howling rain and surf impacts with the blunt face of the jetty sending a towering fountain of foam and spray surging out over the pier, slapping down hard on the weather worn timber. There is a thunderstorm out to sea, throbs of lightning preceding the yawning, echoing rumbles cascading across the dark ocean and into the deep, twisting bowels of the city. The moonless night is illuminated solely by these images, flashes of light gone quicker than they come, captures in time of the towering cloud forms reaching piteously from the black heavens to the chaotic spray of the brooding ocean, the storm like a synapse, the thinnest cleft of apparent calm between the churning bulk of the clouds and the seething pulse of the ocean, arches of white hot light leaping the gulf between sky and sea in an instant, thousands a second, a constant cackle of thunder rising and waning with the rolling energy of the surf against the battered and tired shoreline.

The city is not spared. The weight of the storm piles against it, the crusty scab of gothic civilisation clinging resolutely to the earth like a limpet to rock. Gales scream, washing over it, through it, thunderous squalls whipping the peaks of rolling ocean surges into white caps, surf flicking over the city, filling the air with the scent of the ocean, salt and water and rickety boats and uncleaned decks rank with dried fish entrails. Rain too, thick like a thunderous applause upon the city, sheets of water tumbling from the twisting sky upon the dark alleyways, the rooftop hideaways, wind whipping under doors, around windows, through letter slots, finding all manner of hiding place.

No boats are out tonight, t’would be a suicidal run, the light beacons off the coast silent. The shore is skirted by a profuse, tortuous grove: the dark heat of the mangrove

Comments
PLANETSLAYER
Sunday, 05 November 2006 11:25
WOW! I've been looking at the site for a while now and neva posted a comment but that was some amazing writing. i don't get how part 2 is connected to part 1 and three though, apart from the characte?
MERCENARYSONG
Sunday, 05 November 2006 14:09
Excellent work. I'm intrigued. The tone is very unfirefly but that's what I liked about it. You took what joss made and definitely made it your own...I loved it and hope to see more. You're an excellent writer...never lay down your sword.

Wednesday, 08 November 2006 05:34
Dude, you said i'd love the part with Niska and i did. Guess i'm just a sucker for organised crime. oh and another thing is it only us who aren't writing about the original characters? Just a thought. CD

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