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Best Intentions, ch. 3

Sunday, November 5, 2006

Set post-BDM. Simon and Kaylee discuss going back to Osiris. Inara comes clean with Mal. Angsty, angsty, angsty. Mal/Inara, Simon/Kaylee

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A/N: This is angst folks, pure and simple. Don't read if that offends!

Thanks to my beta, once again, for it all.

And please continue to comment ... you guys keep me going when the plot bunnies scamper away ...

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Best Intentions, ch. 3

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Simon and Kaylee had walked for at least twenty minutes in silence. As soon as they’d stepped outside, Kaylee had gasped slightly at the sight of the beautifully manicured lawns, the gardens dotting the corners, the large fountain resting in the middle. Sliding her hand into his, she had smiled sweetly at him and then walked on in silence, both of them enjoying the peace and the fresh air.

It was a lovely night; the moon overhead was full and shone down just enough light to guide their footsteps. The young couple soon found themselves walking at the edge of what appeared to be a rose garden. Kaylee trailed away from Simon’s side as they entered the space, moving towards a bush of sterling roses. Simon couldn’t help but smile as she bent over a bit to inhale the sweet scent. Why it surprised him that she would be drawn to such a unique flower he didn’t know; Kaylee was as precious and special as the blossom she was admiring.

“They’re real pretty,” she murmured, her fingers ghosting over the soft petals.

Moving to her side, Simon covered her hand with his and said, “They’re very rare. One of the rarest roses.” Glancing to her out of the corner of his eye, he saw her transfixed gaze and asked quietly, “Do you like them?”

Blinking quickly, Kaylee turned to him and smiled, sighing. “Oh, they’re shiny. But back at home, there’s this huge field o’ daisies, yellow ones an’ white ones, all growing wild. My cousins an’ I used to sit out there for hours, weaving daisy chains an’ the like.” She glanced back to the rose and added, “Roses is nice, but they ain’t quite as pretty to me as them daisies.”

Simon smiled at her and pressed a kiss to her cheek, feeling his heart swell with more love for her by the second. She leaned into

Comments
Sunday, 05 November 2006 02:06
Poor Inara. Liking those parents of hers less and less. Loved Mal's reaction to her story, though. He handled it well.
EPM0001
Sunday, 05 November 2006 02:12
This is awesome!! More soon...please.
Sunday, 05 November 2006 02:40
I think this is one of the most amazing things I've ever read. The characters sound perfect, the story is crazy good, and the angst, oh god the angst! I love the Simon/Kaylee interaction, very cute and heartfelt. I'm not usually a Mal/Inara reader but I absolutely love this. It's just so freakin' amazing!!!
Sunday, 05 November 2006 04:49
I looooveeee angst. And I'm so glad I had this to read when I came home tonight!

Poor Inara. I'm so glad she has someone to cuddle with. You described her irrational anger so well, all that much more shocking because it's Inara, and she has so much pride in being able to control her emotions.

And Simon! (Can you tell I love Simon?)You write him sooooo well! The way you do his dialogue is perfect, and his conflicted inner-thoughts. That boy is just so repressed.
Sunday, 05 November 2006 05:07
For some stupid reason, my posts don't go through the first time around.

That there was a thing of beauty. This is without a doubt, my favorite interpretation of Inara's past.

Lemmee ask you something. Did you base Inara's mom on Shoreh Aghdashloo (sp?), the woman from HOUSE OF SAND AND FOG? I know at one point she was supposed to be in SERENITY, and I figured that she'd have something to do with Inara. So whenever I read your characterization of Inara's mom, I just imagine her. Did you base it on Aghdashloo, or a completely different character?
Sunday, 05 November 2006 11:57
Why do I get the feeling Inara's parents had something to do with Jerimiah's leaving?
Sunday, 05 November 2006 17:53
Definitely a plausible explanation of Inara's past, as painful as it is, that correlates well with her behavoir on Serenity.

I had almost given up my search for good fanfic to read, when I can't sleep, until you posted this one!

Sunday, 05 November 2006 19:09
First of all, this made me all teary-eyed! That's awful. Poor Inara.

Secondly, reginaroadie, I love that actress that you mentioned. She's Iranian, isn't she? I think she lovely and I really like her voice. Too bad she wasn't in the movie. I wonder if she was supposed to be Sheydra?

And, omg, blackbeanie, I think you just hit the nail on the head!
Evil. EEEEEEEEVIL!

Sunday, 05 November 2006 22:20
Love S/K's walk in the garden and I'm glad Inara finally confided in Mal. Good little story of Inara's past going here and even though I know what happens, I'm eager to see everyone else's reaction! :)
Monday, 06 November 2006 07:42
Oh...damn...this was grade A quality angst, TamSibling! I definitely was awed and humbled at how you worked these moments with such style and flair, especially when allowing Inara a seemingly OOC moment of sheer rage that turns out to be totally in-character and worthy of symbolizing Inara's breakdown and confession:(

I get the feeling that even if the two couples try to leave, the Serras will pull something to keep them around...especially since they want Inara to hook up with Simon. Still waiting on the scene where they find out Simon's a former wanted felon;)

And like blackbeanie and EmpireX have already raised...Jeremiah was bought off (or even just offed) by emissaries of the Serras. Cuz the Guild, if they had found Inara and Jeremiah, would have probably just blacklisted them or punished them with some ritual mark of shame or something. Jeremiah up and leaving one morning smacks of Edward and Liliana's meddling:(

BEB
Monday, 06 November 2006 18:02
“My parents had wanted me to be a companion since I’d been born. Does that surprise you?”
~ Now that could be seen as downright unsettlin'

“My daughter,”
~ =-O

“And two that I had to give the baby up for adoption.”
~ So I assume we might be meeting young Miss Serra sometime in this story

“I could either get off Sihnon and ply my trade through the ‘verse or I could be expelled from the Guild.”
~ A good (and believable) explanation for why she left Sihnon
Saturday, 31 March 2007 01:45
good stuff. nice capture line. maybe i'll start at the beginning now. :)

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