Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Ballet And Bullets chapter 2

Thursday, June 24, 2004

River and Jayne reflect on their meeting, and Inara goes to the ballet.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4373    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: Characters do not belong to me; they are the property of Joss Whedon, Mutant Enemy and Fox.

Feedback is always welcome.

This one is a River and Jayne AU. It is based around the idea of what would River be like if she had never gone to the Academy, and what if she met Jayne under different circumstances.

Thanks to Cassie E., Kryptonite and tori_deathangel for the inspiration.

Thanks as always to Cassie and jebbypal for the shiny beta's.

Chinese translations:

Chunren: jerk

Dong Ma?: Do you understand?

Hundan: Bastard

Tchen wah: Slut

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…She heard the slight rasp of his callused hand against the thin, silk fabric of her coat as it came to rest at her waist. His other hand languidly trailed up her arm, sending shivers through her. The heat of him warmed her back as he leaned closer to place a soft kiss on her neck. Gentle fingers slid the silk off one shoulder so they could run across her bare skin. His tongue traced a slow pattern up towards her ear as the hand at her waist moved around to splay across her stomach…with a sigh she melted back into him…

River groaned as the alarm went off; she didn’t dare hit the snooze and sink back into her dream again. Still, she pulled the cover over her head and closed her eyes tightly for a moment, trying to burn the memory of the dream into her head.

It wasn’t until she sat up and turned the alarm off in frustration that it hit her just who it was she had been dreaming about. That crude, uncouth mercenary from last night. He’d never said just what it was he did, but the air of danger and the efficient way he’d dispatched her tormenters spoke volumes.

A slight shudder went through her at the memory, if he hadn’t come to her rescue she would have been in real danger. In spite of what she had told him last night she was well aware she would have been helpless against the whole group. And in a place like that it

Comments
Thursday, 24 June 2004 23:34
Still love River in this one..every bit the brat even when Simon's no where to be found! Can't wait to see Inara's devious plan to throw those two kids together!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 25 June 2004 02:12
Neroli - Everytime I see a new fanfic of yours, I stop everything to read it. Once again, excellent, enthralling writing!!!! You truly are gifted.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 25 June 2004 02:40
I completely agree with the previous anonymous comment--I stop everything and read it immediately. Good thing I don't have an alert or something set up for when you post a new story, or I might be in trouble...
Friday, 25 June 2004 20:21
Yay! I was sooo happy to see that you'd updated! Neroli, bao bei, you get better every time you post. Your characterization of River is enthralling and the way you've handled the pair of them thinking of each other afterwards makes me grin. Can't wait to see the next chapter!
Saturday, 26 June 2004 14:40
Mal has a wife? Did I miss that in part one??

This is great, it's made the unbelievable, believable...I really can see Jayne and River getting together.

Hope to see the next installment soon

Thank you :)
Saturday, 26 June 2004 14:44
That was great. Jayne kissing one of 'em on the mouth! Who'd have thought it?

Thought the Kaylee/Jayne scene was priceless. Him thinking about hitting her with the wet mop, her asking "Did you do her?" Very in character and very sweet.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 26 June 2004 22:35
britchick, the "wife" is Saffron, this takes place on Beaumonde right after OMR. ;-)
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 09 July 2004 22:08
Hey Wen!

Note might be a repost from FF.net, it's being a bitch again.

Finally gonna review this! LOL~Anyway so many things I enjoyed in this chapter. Loved the beginning sequence with the dream, very sexy. Enjoyed the glimpse of River and the ballet company. Gives a stronger background. Oh, loved, loved the Kaylee and Jayne conversation...~made me smile~ Fixed the typos, good...and interesting on Inara getting those ideas, crafty ain't she? And your River is just great, I like sane River as much as not so sane River. Still solid pacing, really looking forward to more...from all three stories. ~snark~I meant ~hint~ But I agree, this is kinda fluffy compared to your other ones. It's your happy fic! LOL~ So be happy!

Bravo!
Lily aka Cassie E
MAIMAIJAYNE
Friday, 30 July 2004 06:29
i love the way this story is shaping up, it has real potential. i love everything that you write!!
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 05 March 2005 04:36
plz you must write more i love this story
plz you must write more
jazz
i love jayne and river in this story
Tuesday, 19 April 2005 15:59
Very good story-Please dont keep us waiting much longer! Thanks.
Tuesday, 19 April 2005 19:03
more, encore, encore encore! =claps=
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 09 June 2005 11:37
Loved it! Where is the next chapter? Please write it soon. Like submit TODAY!!!!!!!!!!!
Tuesday, 13 September 2005 18:17
i always hoped those two kids would get together...
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 10 October 2005 22:52
Planning on continuing?

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