A/N: I'm baack! I'm sure you've been waiting anxiously! (:o)
Here is my next multi-chapter story (19 all together). It focuses mainly on Mal/Inara and Simon/Kaylee (my two favorite ships) and involves Inara heading back to Sihnon. Set approximately 6 months following the BDM.
I crave feedback, people, like a drug ... seriously, I've been in withdrawal since I finished posting the last series ... don't leave me hanging!
And thanks again to Leiasky, who continues to find the time to beta and give me plot bunnies! You rock, my dear.
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Best Intentions, ch. 1
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“Sir, are you sure you wanna take this job?”
Mal turned an incredulous look to his first mate and then turned back to stare out the ship’s canopy and into the black. “Are you kiddin’ me, Zo?” he asked rhetorically, noting that River had not moved her eyes from the controls since they had begun talking. “This job is serious money an’ we need the coin.”
With an inaudible sigh, Zoe answered, “I ain’t gonna disagree there, sir, but it’s also gonna take us pretty close to the Core.” She had hoped that over the past months, since Miranda, since he and Inara had gotten together that he would start acting more cautiously, not recklessly. With a hand to her brow, Zoe realized what a foolish notion that had been.
Rolling his eyes, Mal swiveled around fully in his chair and looked at his first mate. Zoe was a changed woman and that was no secret. Since Wash’s death, since Miranda, since the Reavers, there wasn’t much about Zoe that was the same. Except the look she was favoring him with now; that how-can-you-be-so-stupid-and-how-can-I-be-dumb-enough-to-follow-you look that Mal had seen plenty of times during the war and over the past seven years that they’d flown together.
But with a tight grin, he realized, she was still here, stupid or not. “C’mon, Zoe, the Core? The Alliance couldn’t find their way out of a paper bag with both hands and a flashlight right now. You know that. You think I’m gonna run ‘cause o’ t
You can't take the sky from me
~ Excellent description
“I’m sorry, did you just knock?”
~ Too funny that he waited until they had a relationship in the works before he started knocking (well, a relationship not based solely on yelling at one another [at least I assume it isn't])
The entire Mal/Inara scene with the non - yelling/name-calling banter was very well written, and I like the idea of looking into Inara's past and things involving her home planet
“Now, as ya’ll know we just finished the McNamara job an’ it went off without a hitch,”
~ This doomed them to have the job not go smoothly, seeing as it is an extremely rare occurance unto itself
“I don’t gotta go, do I?” Jayne raised his hand from the other end of the table, his face full of disgust at the prospect. He did not like rich folk, unless of course, he was one.
~ Perfect Jayne attitude
Favourite parts? When she gathers in her self-control, because it was so Inara, and so sad, too, that she still feels like she has to hide parts of herself.
I also loved this observation:
[It was one of the things she and Mal had in common, a deep-seated desire to get as much distance from their memories as possible.]
So true.
Also, I hope I get Mal/Inara right, because I'm working on another M/I based story at the moment ... stay tuned!
Ahh, I forsee much angst before the end of this. . . .
Gotta wonder about Inara's family that she NEVER EVER mentions.
Love the way Mal manipulated the situation to find out...what is up with her???
So glad your back!
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