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Brothers - Part VI

Sunday, October 29, 2006

Mal has been betrayed, while Freya and Zoe face a few problems of their own ... Thanks so much for the feedback! It's fantastic!

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“Where’s Mal?” Simon asked as Vinnie jogged up to them.

“Mal?” Vinnie looked at them both. “You mean he ain’t with you?”

Harry pushed himself from the wall. “He came to find you. You must have seen him.”

“No, didn’t see anyone,” Vinnie said. “He must have gone down a different passage.”

“There isn’t one,” Simon said, lifting the map.

“Has to be. Maybe this is wrong,” Vinnie said, shrugging. “Prob’ly got himself lost. We’ll come across him.”

“You handed him over,” Harry said suddenly, having been staring at his brother.

“What?” Simon asked.

“I don’t know what you’re talking about,” Vinnie said. “We’d better get going. Mal’ll prob’ly catch us up.” He tugged at Harry’s sleeve. “Come on.”

“I thought I was wrong, that I hadn’t seen what I saw. But I did, didn’t I?”

“Harry, what are you –“ Simon began but was interrupted.

“You were talking to them, talking to those hun dan , just before I didn’t see you again. They told me you’d escaped, but … Vinnie, no-one escapes on their own from this place.” Harry stared at Vinnie. “What did you do, Vinnie?”

“I didn’t do nothing!”

“Did you promise to bring Mal back here, if you could get away? Is that it?”

“Harry –“

“You sold him out.”

Vinnie started to protest, to shake his head, but the look on his brother’s face broke him. “It was the only way!” he insisted, holding onto Harry’s arm.

“What the hell’s wrong with you?” Harry asked, pulling away. “We don’t trade lives!”

“You think I wanted to die down here?” Vinnie asked in turn, suddenly angry. “That I was gonna let you die down here either?”

“They’ve got Mal?” Simon put in, but he was ignored.

“Vinnie, we don’t do this! Not to anyone, and most definitely not to Mal!”

“I wasn’t gonna leave him here,” Vinnie protested. “The said if I brought him back, they’d let you go. Then once they did that I was gonna go get him, use his crew.”

“You think they were really gonna do that? Let me walk? Oh,Vinnie.” Harry shook his head.

“Okay,

Comments
Sunday, 29 October 2006 22:32
Oh, I just *love* Simon taking charge when he finds out that Vinnie betrayed Mal into the hands of the enemy and it was nice to see Harry as disgusted at what his brother had done. But oh boy, did Zoe and Freya kick ass! I just hope Inara's attempt to reason with the mine owner doesn't plunge everyone into even more trouble. Thinking she should just do as Freya said and stay out of it. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 30 October 2006 00:26
I really hope Inara can use all of her talents of persuasion to convince Leon to let Mal go, but I'm a mite worried that ain't gonna work.

Gotta love Zoe and Freya taking a stand and protecting their home! And I too loved Simon getting into the thick of things! Bring on the next!
Monday, 30 October 2006 02:32
Poor Mal, being duped like that, and now with the beatings, you can't help but feel sorry for him.

I agree with everyone that Simon being so assertive in that situation was awesome!

Somehow, I get the feeling that when all is said and done with this little adventure, Harry is gonna kick his brother's ass (assuming they all survive)!
Wednesday, 01 November 2006 01:06
Oh...why do I get the feeling this Leon character is gonna force Inara to make an Atherton that's about as successful as the first was with its namesake:(

Still...I am definitely hoping for Simon-led heroics. Cuz damn it, the time is ripe for a BDR executed by a Top 3 minded person;)

BEB

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