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Brothers - Part IV

Friday, October 27, 2006

Only because it's the weekend coming up do you get a double hit! The rescue's on, and the crew prepare ... Feedback, please!

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Mal was trying to think, studying the plans they‘d gotten off the Cortex of the mines, trying to figure the easiest and safest way in. He’d been staring at them so much his eyes were aching, and he sat back in his chair, pinching the bridge of his nose. Movement to his left got his attention, and he looked down the corridor towards the bunks. Freya was just climbing out of Jayne’s quarters, and Mal wondered what the hell she’d been doing down there.

“Mal, I’ve been thinking,” Hank said, stepping down into the dining area from the engine room behind him.

“Your feelings for Zoe’re your concern, so unless it’s got something to do with Tetris, I ain’t exactly in a sharing mood, Hank,” Mal said, not looking around, just watching as Freya turned the corner to go down into the cargo bay.

“It is.” Hank sat down next to him. “I think I know how we can get to land.”

“Well, that ain’t difficult,” Mal said, looking into his pilot’s eager face. “I was figuring on taking a shuttle in, parking her same place as before.”

“I think we can land Serenity at the dock,” Hank said quickly.

“Really.”

“I stayed on the Cortex after downloading those plans,” Hank went on, “checking a few things out. There’s a regular freight run to the mines every two weeks, but once in a while a ship lands on spec, selling luxuries. There’s a thriving town down there, and people like a few niceties occasionally. If we could pick up some goods, make like we’re wanting to do business …” Hank looked at his captain, willing him to see the advantages.

Mal smiled. “It’s a good idea,” he conceded. “What did you have in mind to sell?”

“Well it did cross my mind to offer the girls, but since I figured you’d actually need me alive to come on this job I kinda rejected that idea.”

“Probably for the best,” Mal agreed dryly.

“So I was thinking … we’re passing Beylix. Could pick up a few goodies there, just for window dressing.”

“And it ain’t out of our way. An hour or two won’t make that much difference.” Mal nodded. “

Comments
Friday, 27 October 2006 17:26
Wait, lemme get this right: Vinnie's an evildoing, lowdown, good for nothing deceiver?

Figures, this was bound to become unhinged at some point (this is Mal, after all). My only hope is that Vinnie's intenions are for a greater good, and no one get's shot or shot at(like that's gonna happen).

Methinks River's comments to Jayne had something to do with Freya bing in his room. Something tells me Freya made Jayne promise to get Mal back alive, no matter what the cost to himself. That or I'm crazy as a moonbrained monkey (a distict possibility).

Wonderful chapter, and I my spider sense is tingling that you have a thing for gift giving, you ol' softie! Two chapters= Twice as much funsies!
Friday, 27 October 2006 17:39
I KNEW Vinnie could not be trusted ... oh I wish I knew how to curse fluently in Mandarin, because I have some choice words for that hun dan right now.

The goodbyes between everyone were very sweet, but I wish Simon had come clean and that Kaylee hadn't let him off the hook. But otherwise, loving it!
Saturday, 28 October 2006 23:28
Not surprised Vinnie's the weak link...but I am hoping that you have made his reasons for his actions sympathetic...like Harry's life being directly in the balance:(

And while I am not quite as eager as TamSibling is for a different outcome for Simon and Kaylee's conversation...I was expecting a tad bit more angst and conflict over the topic;)

BEB
Sunday, 29 October 2006 03:26
I knew Vinnie was not on the level, what a horrible low-life piece of scum. I'm guessing though that Leon or his buddies must have Harry as the lever to get Vinnie to betray Mal. I'm not sure whether Inara contacting the mine owner is going to help or make things even worse. Gulp. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 20 January 2008 02:21
with a name like vinnie, what else can you expect?

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