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Brothers - Part II

Thursday, October 26, 2006

Second part of a multi-part story. Vinnie reveals more about Tetris ... Please leave feedback, good or bad.

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“Tetris?” Mal stared at him. “What the hell are you saying, Vinnie?”

“I thought I was pretty clear myself. I’ve been a guest of the mining company, Mal.”

“When?”

“I managed to get out ‘bout three months back.” Vinnie returned the look.

“Three months? That was – ”

“Yeah. I escaped using your little diversion,” he said, sitting back. “I guess I should thank you,” he added, but he wasn’t smiling.

“How did you figure it was us?” Mal wanted to know.

“Guards were talking about the new arrivals. There ain’t that many look like your mercenary, and the guards said there was a smart-ass man with them – I guess they musta meant you.”

“Thanks,” Mal said sarcastically.

“Once I got out I did some asking around, thought I might thank them. Imagine my surprise when I found out that a big man fitting that description worked for you, along with a couple of other panty-waist idiots. Didn’t take much to figure it, not since I know you.”

“How did you end up down there?” Zoe asked, sitting down at the table, her dark face implacable as usual.

“Got into a bit of bad business over on Santo. These guys thought I gypped them out of money in a card game, only I didn’t know they were slavers. Jumped me leaving the bar. Next thing I knew I was up to my ass in dust digging for that damn blue ore.” Vinnie picked up a stray piece of bread, chewing on it thoughtfully. “If’n I ever lay my hands on them again …” He brought his mind back. “Then the power went down, and I just took advantage. Busted the guard’s head with a lump of rock, deactivated the pacifier and ran. Managed to get to the surface, stowed on a transport and … well, here I am.” He put his arms out, indicating Serenity.

“You were damn lucky,” Mal said, shaking his head. “If it weren’t for my crew we’d still be there.”

“Yeah.” Vinnie studied him. “Guess you were the lucky ones, though. The kind of luck a lot of us didn’t get.”

“What are you talking about, Vinnie?”

For a long moment the other man didn‘t speak, then,

Comments
Thursday, 26 October 2006 14:35
Oh geez, Mal is being really stubborn! And Freya has a point - this pregnancy was HIS idea and now he's going to risk his life.

Plus, I want to know what's wrong with Kaylee's baby. I know there's more to it than what Simon is letting on.

Can't wait to read what comes next - and I too am not a big fan of Vinnie.
Thursday, 26 October 2006 15:12
Really good please continue fast poor Freya i hope she is ok
Saturday, 28 October 2006 18:15
The one I feel mad at isn't Mal but Vinnie. While everyone is making their own feelings known about the Captain's need to go and try to save Harry, there is the little matter of the fact that Vinnie and Harry ended up in the mine in the first place being due to their own actions. Vinnie seems to have changed quite a bit from when he was in the War with Mal and Zoe and I have to side with Freya, I don't trust him now. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 28 October 2006 19:39
Gotta agree with AMDOBELL....Mal ain't seeing the point that both brothers ended up on Tetris through their own actions presumably. Mal's continuing guilt over failing those under his care is Mal's major weak spot...and Vinnie's playing it mighty well:(

BEB

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