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Wrestling With Angels

Tuesday, June 22, 2004

For River, everything is Now.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2026    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Rating: PG-13, maybe R for 'inappropriate' sexual situations. Beware the hints of CSI.

Spoilers: None

Disclaimer: Not mine.

A/N: 1) Eternal thanks to Ktmagik for the beta and the plot bunny and . . . well, too many other things to go into here. . . 2) suoyou de dou shidang means "all that is holy"

1000 words exactly

Feedback: Yes, please! (mona1347@livejournal.com)

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Book sat Bible in hand, keeping watch. River thrashed restlessly in her sleep. "Like Jacob wrestling with the Angel," he thought.

It had been a Bad Day. Simon injected her with a high-dose smoother and Book offered to watch over her for a while so they could all get some sleep. Simon's eyes were bleary and he blinked rapidly as Book shooed him across the hall, assuring him he wasn't sleepy and it wasn't too much trouble.

Book was deep into his reading when he glanced over at the bed, then started to see River had sat up. So slowly and quietly he hadn't seen her move at all. She wasn't looking at him, her eyes were unfocused. "Not gonna find me," she whispered as she slid to her feet. For a moment Book was too startled to move or say anything, then realized that a combination of the drugs and her dreams seemed to be causing her to sleepwalk. He decided it was best to move aside and let her past him rather than wake her and possibly face a violently loud scene. She seemed calmer now than when her eyes were closed.

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Move past the Shepherd and his Symbol. Not relevant. She heard his thoughts as she slid her compartment door open . . . wrestling with the angel . . . sleepwalking . . . better to let her go and follow . . . not wake the others.

The numbers loom in her path as she makes her way past the infirmary. Blocking her with their hard curves and solid facts. Slowing her down even more than her heavy legs.

Neozolpidem. 50mg. A high dose reserved for only the most agitated of paranoid schizophrenics. Causes drowsiness, fatigue in limbs, lucid

Comments
NUR
Tuesday, 22 June 2004 22:03
Short, snapshot-in-time-ish, undertones of CSI... [insert insane laughter here] you are my fic twin. I like the way you melted the hide and seek into Jayne's bunk. Well done.
Tuesday, 22 June 2004 22:18
I could just imagine the look on Jayne's face! The merging of past and present shows in a very visual way how River's mind plays tricks on her. Good myth, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
MONA1347
Wednesday, 23 June 2004 04:42
Thanks Nur and Ali for commenting on this and my other stories. I'm new to the fanfic thing and a late-comer to Firefly so its extra-shiney to hear. :)
Wednesday, 23 June 2004 13:11
Welcome to the fanfic thing - prepare to be swallowed up by it!

That was really good. I liked the way you had bits that were like solid islands of fact in a shifty, amorphous sea of things that were/could be. And Jayne - hi-larious!
ATHENAE
Friday, 25 June 2004 03:49
If you're new to fanfic, fanfic is lucky to have you. Adored this, even though CSI is not my kink, I could see it, and good writing will overcome any resistance to any ship at all. This had it.

A.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 26 June 2004 06:20
Ouch... I never thought I'd say this, but... poor Jayne!

Poor River too... "Why, Simon? Why this one?" - great line!

Quality story and writing (and great plot bunny too, KTMagik! - I love your name, btw.)

~AUMagic

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