Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

Ruse de Guerre

Tuesday, October 24, 2006

So, like, what happened to that scavenger ship during "Out of Gas"? Here's one possible answer.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3233    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Sounds returned first: the hum of an engine; the clickings, whirrings and beeps of a control console; soft voices that grew louder and more familiar as she fought her way back to consciousness. Sound, then sensation – she was lying down, on some hard surface; within was a vague and distant notion of pain. Scent returned, in the grease and ozone smell of a ship’s interior. Last of all came sight, as Zoe opened her eyes and took in her surroundings: one of Serenity’s shuttles. The one Inara didn’t use.

Simon was there, hovering. “Welcome back,” he said, that soft voice he used when he was working. Working on her? Why would Simon be working on her?

Before she could sort her memories sensibly, Wash was there too, smiling nervously. “Baby? Hey, Zoe, good to have you back.” He was speaking softly, like Simon – worried. Wash had been worried about her, and Simon was working on her, and they were in the shuttle. Why were they not on Serenity? Her last memory, she was certain of it, was of the common room on Serenity, and now she was here instead. Injured.

“She doesn’t know,” said River, and Zoe knew that River meant that Zoe didn’t know why she was where she was, or why she was injured. But Wash and Simon didn’t know what River meant, and they ignored her cryptic comment. Wash grasped her hand, and Simon was checking some sort of monitor.

Zoe tried to speak, but her throat was dry.

“Wait. Here,” Simon said, producing a small cup of water from somewhere nearby. Wash slipped a hand under her head and helped her taste it. Helped a little too enthusiastically; Zoe nearly choked, and the water spilled down her chin. She gagged, swallowed, forced her voice to work: “What happened?”

Wash and Simon exchanged looks. “There was an explosion aboard Serenity,” he said. “You saved Kaylee’s life. But you were hurt,” the catch in his voice was pride, and worry, all in one.

“What else?” she demanded. She knew she was hurt, that much was obvious.

Comments
KITTYKAT26
Tuesday, 24 October 2006 02:35
From the shadows at the back of the passenger compartment, River said “I am a big damn hero. It’s just that nobody knows it yet.”

That line made me smile, made me think of the movie!
Tuesday, 24 October 2006 04:37
Very nicely done! I always love when someone fills in the missing pieces in their fic and does it well!
Tuesday, 24 October 2006 09:38
This is just brilliant! I love how you have expanded on the shuttles returning to Serenity and also explained why the Scavenger ship and crew left the area rather than hanging around until the Captain died so they could take the ship. Very neat. You were spot on with everybody. Would have loved to have seen this in "Out Of Gas". Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 24 October 2006 13:45
I haven't read a whole lot of fan fiction yet, but I'll have to admit, that was a decently written bit of speculation. Good work.
Tuesday, 24 October 2006 15:36
Nicely done scene.

River's line made me think of the film where she turns out to be a Big Damn Hero.
Tuesday, 24 October 2006 17:31
I liked it. Good explanation about the scavenger ship - I wondered about it too, why didn't they just wait around and try to retake Serenity. And very good crew voices.
Keep it up. :)
Tuesday, 24 October 2006 18:42
honestly i'd never thought about this, but truly i'm glad someone did! i can totally imagine this happenin. very shiny. characters seemed very real. i like!
Thursday, 26 October 2006 02:24
Excellent missing scene. Very plausible. Characters ring true. Loved it!
vaughn
Thursday, 26 October 2006 02:47
Brilliant work, nauticalgal! Definitely love how you had Wash and Simon juryrig the scoutship pulse beacon to make the scavengers think the Alliance were on the scene...cuz unless Mal tracked down the Walden (scavenger vessel was supposedly called the "Walden") and got his justice, she would have stayed around like a metal vulture:(

BEB

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