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The Browncoats Book Of Haikus And Tankas: JAYNE

Friday, October 20, 2006

Haikus and Tankas about Jayne

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Haiku #70

I Gave Them What For

I’m The Hero Of Canton

The Man They Call Me

***Liberally adapted from Adam Baldwin’s Firefly Easter egg***

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Haiku #71

Ma’s orange knit hat;

Pretty cunning don’t ja think?

It keeps my head warm.

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Haiku #72

She shore is pretty

Vera is my fav-o-rite,

Gotta treat her right.

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Haiku #73

Mal’s not so tough, it’s

Easy to best him. He backs

Down from easy fights.

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Tanka #31

Now Kaylee, I’ve had

My eye on her for a while.

Had a chance to till

That gose doc-tor and his

Moon brained sister came aboard.

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Haiku #74

I won’t kill a man

Lessen it’s in a fair fight

Fair to me at least – that is.

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Haiku #75

Everyone’s in a

Hurry to get someplace else;

Means more food for me!

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Haiku #76

Moon brained girl cut me.

Someday I’ll fix her real good,

And her brother too.

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Haiku #77

I weren’t in the war.

No way I’d fight for nuthin’;

No one’s really free.

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Haiku #78

Kaylee’s got her priss,

But sum day she’ll want a man

And I got the parts.

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Haiku #79

Moon brained kicked my ass.

Weren’t fair, tried not to hurt her;

Won’t do that again.

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Comments
Saturday, 21 October 2006 16:38
They are really cool, love it! Especially Nos 70 and 74. I really like the way you captured Jayne's voice with them. Shiny!
Monday, 23 October 2006 02:31
Yep...totally Jayne;)

BEB

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