Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Programming

Friday, October 20, 2006

Next in the Mal/Freya series, after EBB & FLOW. Freya has some very bad dreams ... Please leave feedback to tell me whether you like this or not, as I most appreciate it!

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Freya started down the stairs to the cargo bay when she heard her name being called.

“Freya?”

She looked up. “Hey, ‘Nara. You need something?”

“I can’t fix … could you come and help?”

“Sure.” Freya smiled and went back up the metal steps and along to shuttle one. She followed the Companion inside, somewhat surprised to see River sitting on the bed. “So, what do you need fixing?” she asked.

“You,” Inara said.

“What?” Freya was as surprised as she could be. “Me?”

“Mal asked me to speak to you.”

Freya shook her head forcefully, wagging her finger. “No, no. We are not having this conversation.” She turned to leave, and found River had moved silently between her and the door. “River, get out of my way.”

“Need to talk,” the young psychic said. “To tell.”

“River, I don’t want to hurt you,” Freya said, moving forward until there was barely an inch between them.

“You need to tell,” the girl insisted, her dark eyes seeming to reach deep into Freya’s psyche.

“Oh, qingwa cao de liumang ,” Freya said angrily.

“Mal wants to know why you’re avoiding him,” Inara said to her back. “What he’s done.”

Freya turned. “Nothing!” she insisted. “He’s not done anything. It’s just … I've not been sleeping well, probably the after effects of that bug, and I thought a few nights in the guest quarters would do me good.”

“Lying,” River said, sitting back on the bed and drawing her bare feet up under her.

“Is that why she’s here?” Freya said sharply, glaring at the young girl.

“Freya, please,” Inara said. “Why don’t you sit down?”

Freya exhaled heavily through her nose, but sat on the sofa.

“Dreams,” River whispered.

Inara spoke quietly. “Is that it?”

Nee ta ma duh tyen-shia suo-yp duh num doh gai si ,” Freya breathed.

“I take it she’s right?”

“Yes.” Freya sat back. “I've been dreaming. Every night.”

“We all dream, Frey.”

“Not like this. They’re so … real.”

“So … what are they about?”

“Sex,” River put in.

“Damn it, River!” Freya

Comments
Friday, 20 October 2006 09:40
This was brilliant! I just hope all that evil conditioning was forced out of her though I am wondering whether it could be removed that easily. I hope so because no one should have to go through something as terrible as that and as misguided as Inara and River's attempt was to help Freya it seems that by accidentally sparking off the chain of events that triggered her they may actually have helped get rid of Eric Lon's last evil influence. And was I the only one cheering with a smile on my face when Freya goes back to Mal? Very shiny, love these tales of Freya and Mal. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 20 October 2006 14:09
That was beautifully written - Eric Lon is a hun dan of the highest degree and I am thrilled that Mal ended him!

And I too, did a little dance of joy when Freya went back to Mal! I love them together!

Awesome, awesome, awesome ... more please!
Sunday, 22 October 2006 22:27
Damn...this was a lucky break for the crew that River and Inara's well-meaning clusterf--k worked out in the end. Definitely was worried mightily as Freya was struggling through the dreams. Though I wanted to see what exactly finally allowed the trigger. Mal's "death" at Serenity Valley, perhaps?

Still...brilliant chapter once again, Jane0904!

BEB

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