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Firefly: The Past PART 4

Thursday, October 19, 2006

Part 4 of a story about Shepherd's past.

I'm not a doctor. I'm a computer specialist. If I get doctorin' terms wrong, don't sue me. I say what sounds really cool.

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The sky was clear when Mal, Zoe, and Jayne stepped off the ship. Mal saw that Jayne was right--four people were approching the ship. And they weren't armed. At least what Mal could see. The men came closer, and Mal stopped on the edge of the ship's ramp and called out to them.

"What can I do for you folks?" Mal said. The men stopped, putting their hands in their pockets. One stepped forward.

"We saw your ship crash. We was just comin' to see if you needed any help." The man was tall and lean, yet muscular. He looked to be some kind of farmer, due to his large hat and overalls. All four men were covered with mud. They all had a similar appearance, and Mal deduced that they must be brothers of some sort. He motioned to Serenity.

"We have crashed, but, we're gettin' her fixed up. No need for any help. We'll be on our way."

The one man stepped forward a bit more, offering his hand for a shake. Mal eyed it, and the man pulled it away. "Name's Abe. These are my brothers, John, Soren, and Mitch." Abe pointed to each of the men in succession. Mal nodded to them once.

"Thanks once again for your offer, but we don't need help to patch up our ship." He said, marking the conversation as complete.

Abe shook his head. "Well, that might be a problem. Y'see, we're honest folk, and we always treat guests like that--guests. We can't take no for an answer to come and eat at our place tonight. That'll give you a comfortable place to rest until you start the patchwork. You might need some hands, too."

Mal looked at Zoe, who remained stone-face. Jayne grinned.

" Gai si , what's wrong in free food?" He glanced at Mal, still holding Vera in his hands. Mal gave a slight shake of his head.

"Jayne, keep your mouth shut." He turned to Abe. "Can you just show us where your house is, so that if we want to come, we can come later? We have an injured man, and we want to keep him in our infirmary."

Abe's eyebrows rose. "An injured man? Why didn't you say so before?" He snapped his fingers. "We'll brin

Comments
Friday, 20 October 2006 01:13
Uh oh, "beware Greeks bearing gifts" springs to mind. And why, if Book is afraid of the place and/or people doesn't he speak up and say why? And how come River isn't spouting out warnings or somesuch her own self? I just hope our crew don't get themselves in all manner of a fix here. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 20 October 2006 06:12
For some reason, the forceful...hospitality of the 4 men gives me pause. That kind of polite insistance makes me wonder why they're eager to have contact with the crew so badly. Less they know Book's aboard:(

BEB

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