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Ebb and Flow - Bathgate Abbey

Thursday, October 19, 2006

What River, Kaylee and Simon were doing at Bathgate while Mal was getting shot. Feedback, please!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3729    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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“It’s lovely,” Kaylee said, clapping her hands in delight at the small room she’d been given. The sunlight had warmed the old stone walls, and the cheerful rug on the floor matched the bedspread, an old-fashioned quilted design using lots of old fabric swatches.

“I’m glad you like it,” Shepherd Delrani, a tall, upright man with silver hair, said, smiling. He pointed to a small chest of drawers in the corner. “I hope there will be enough room for your clothes.”

“Oh, I ain't brought much. Don’t dress up fancy too often.” She grinned at him. “And prob’ly be a while before I get to again,” she added, patting her belly.

“Yes, I had noticed.” Delrani inclined his head. “And your husband? Is he not joining you here?”

“Oh, I ain't married,” Kaylee said, turning to look out of the window, and so not seeing the slight tightening of the Shepherd’s mouth. “Simon’s the father.”

“The young man with you?”

“Mmn.” She glanced back at him. “Cute, ain't he?”

“I can’t say I've noticed.”

Kaylee waved to someone outside. “See you in a few days!” she called, watching Freya as she turned and walked out of the courtyard back towards the bulk of Serenity sitting high on the hill. She turned back. “Frey’s my friend,” she explained, leaning back on the windowsill. “Been through a lot together, all in all.”

“She seemed … attentive.”

Kaylee laughed. “Making sure I'm okay. All the crew are like that: we’re family.”

“Yet the Captain hasn’t made sure that the father of your child marries you?” Delrani shook his head. “Surely it is his responsibility –“

“Ain't no-one’s responsibility but mine, Preacher,” Kaylee said hurriedly. “Ain't asking Simon to marry me. ‘Sides, he ain't goin’ anywhere.” She laughed again and turned back to the window. “Sure is pretty here.”

Simon, in his room a little further along the hall, watched Freya walking back to the ship, Mal waiting for her. He was glad they were back together, the way it should be, but he was even more glad that they weren’t going to

Comments
Thursday, 19 October 2006 17:26
Oh, that was just cruel - leaving it there. I do not like Delrani, but I suppose that was the point! I do like Jethro though and his connection with River, that was cool - maybe a bit of romance in her future?

And I really like how Simon defended Kaylee and their decision not to marry yet .. thanks for sharing!
Thursday, 19 October 2006 20:17
What a piece of *goushi* that Delrani is - no wonder River hates him. I have a feeling things are about to get worse for our valiant heroes. So glad though that Simon, River and Kaylee are reunited with Serenity - where they belong and I loved River's insights. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 22 October 2006 05:12
Methinks Delrani's actions will equal hijinks abound for the crew. And who doesn't love hijinks, hmm?

This makes a wondeful little compainion piece to 'Ebb and Flow', and makes a great contrast to all the angsty near deathness of it.

Can't wait for the hijinks to occur, if you decde they should, of course.
Sunday, 29 June 2008 13:08
just re-read this:)
yeah... i see a LOT of potential in Bathgate, Book etc...

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