Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Portrait

Monday, October 16, 2006

A picture brings back memories for one of Serenity's crew. Just a little something that wrote itself - feedback, good or bad, is wonderful!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3525    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

Tweet

He’d bought it because it called out to him. Something about the painting had persuaded him to part with his hard-earned cash. After some haggling, of course. Couldn’t be seen to be too eager. But he’d paid what he thought was fair, and carried it back to Serenity. He hadn’t gotten any idea what he was gonna do with it, but took it into his bunk, planning to hang it somewhere, maybe above his guns, but it stared at him, like it was daring him to say something, do something in the middle of the night. So that kinda made up his mind for him.

Everyone was sitting down at dinner, chatting away. Mal had just told a joke that was on the wrong side of bad, and Freya had thumped him on the arm, causing him to threaten her with withdrawal of conjugal rights.

“Mal, I hate to point this out, but we ain’t married,” Freya said. “We are living in sin.”

“Lot of that going on,” Kaylee said happily, patting her rounded belly. “And a whole lot more.”

“I've offered,” Simon said, but she shushed him with a finger to his lips.

“’N’ I told you I don’t want that. Not yet.”

He smiled at her, his love shining from his face and making everyone else feel a mite uncomfortable. Except for River.

“If you start here I shall hit you over the head with a chair,” she said calmly.

“Start what, sweetie?” Kaylee said mischievously.

“Anything at all.”

Simon hid a smile and turned to look at his sister. “Did I tell you today just how much of a brat you are?”

“Yes.”

“Then just take this as a reminder.”

River gave him a dazzling smile and threw a bread roll at him.

“Hey, we gonna have a food fight?” Hank asked, brightening up. “I bags Zoe on my team.”

“No food fight,” Mal said firmly. “It costs too much to waste –“

Freya plucked the other roll from the air in front of his face. “River, stop it.”

“None left,” the young psychic said, not at all repentant.

“Jayne, I know my food ain't a patch on Kaylee’s, but you got some problem with it?” Zoe asked, looking at the big mercenary. For on

Comments
Monday, 16 October 2006 13:41
Aww, what a sweet little back story for Zoe. I really like this - and the fact that Jayne bought it for her is even better, something tells me that if Hank had bought it for her, she would have been really ticked - but not Jayne.

Beautifully written and very vivid! Thanks for sharing.
Monday, 16 October 2006 14:17
*Sighs contentedly*

That was wonderful.

"“I’m shiny!” Jayne insisted. “Just … thinkin’ is all.”

“Don’t hurt yourself,” Hank joked.

“You wanna go outside?” Jayne growled."-Perfectly done.

A beautiful work.
Monday, 16 October 2006 23:18
That was a really unusual piece and I liked Jayne giving it to Zoe because the picture belonged with her, as is Anselm from the Great Beyond had found a way to prod him so that she would get her wish. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 17 October 2006 19:50
Wow...this was beautiful, Jane0904! Definitely gives more dimensions to Zoe's almost non-existant backstory:D

Jayne's purchase of it is mighty interesting though. Not saying you're trying to herd Jayne and Zoe together, but I find it rather...fitting that Jayne was the one to find and purchase the painting. The man's always been an admirer of what is beautiful and/or dangerous. Why not a painting of Zoe when she was possibly at her most beautiful AND dangerous;)

BEB
SKILLETO
Monday, 10 September 2007 20:06
I know this was a long time ago for you, but Pretty story

Post Your Comments

You must log in to post comments.