Blue Sun Room FICTION - HUMOR

Bug

Saturday, October 14, 2006

Serenity's crew come down with something, and Simon and Jayne have a little heart to heart ... Follows ENOUGH and CURIOSITY. Please let me know what you think!

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“Don’t you dare come near me!” Freya called, stopping Mal in his tracks on the middle rung of the ladder.

“Why? What’ve I done?”

“Not sure yet,” Freya said, then threw up loudly into the bucket she was holding on her lap. “ Gao yang jong duh goo yang ,” she added, grabbing a tissue and wiping at her mouth.

“Honey?” Mal moved down another rung. “You okay?”

“Do I look okay?” she asked, sitting up in the bunk, one of Mal’s flannel shirts done up to her neck. He couldn’t see what she was wearing on the bottom half as the blanket was tucked securely around her waist. More than one blanket, in fact.

“Is this a trick question?” he asked, stepping down onto the floor and moving towards her.

“I've got some kind of stomach flu!” she said loudly.

He stopped. “I’m away for three days and you get sick?”

“I told you, it’s a bug.” She sniffed. “Ask Simon. He told me. Said my temperature was up. Seemed pretty impressed it was so high without me actually being unconscious.” She covered her mouth again. “Gorramit,” she muttered, pulling the bucket back towards her, but this time she was able to fight it back.

“And you think I gave it to you?” Mal asked.

“Did I say that? Sorry, but did I actually say that?” Freya rubbed a hand across her red eyes. “Only I’m beginning to think I might be hallucinating.”

“No, not quite. But you told me not to come near you,” Mal explained.

“Oh. No, right. I meant so you don’t catch it.” She lay back, closing her eyes. “It’s gos se , believe me. I ache everywhere, too.” She shifted slightly, trying to find a comfortable position, then sat up. “And I can’t sleep, ‘cos I wake up feeling like I'm drowning.”

Mal winced slightly. “Thanks for that,” he said. “Little bit too much information.”

“Hey, you’re supposed to be there for me!” she said, wiping her forehead. “I know I look like something Kaylee scrapes out of the coil, but it ain't permanent.”

“You told me to go away.”

“I didn’t mean it.” She sighed, only this tim

Comments
Saturday, 14 October 2006 12:44
I loved this fic and I love your take on the verse. Thank you for such great stories, they have kept me mighty entertained. As long as you keep writing them I'll keep reading them.
Saturday, 14 October 2006 21:28
Oh no, a bug is loose on Serenity and bringing down the crew one by gorram one! Some new-found Alliance biological warfare or a pretty dodgy vindaloo when they were dirtside? Let's just hope Simon doesn't get it, they need him to tend to the others. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 15 October 2006 00:20
Mutant virus enemy! Emesis basins ahoyURrugumphaahg. Ew.
Thank you for allowing Jayne to see River as something other than:
a) Crazy and to be avoided and ridiculed.
b) Something to hump.
There's more to him than meets the eye. Maybe not *much* more, but it's there.
Sunday, 15 October 2006 02:03
Yikes! I can only imagine being in a confined space with seven people who are puking their guts out. Here's hoping that Simon, Mal and Zoe don't get it ... depending on how strong the strain is, Freya could give it to everyone.

I too, loved the Simon/Jayne convo in the infirmary, that was just priceless! Keep 'em comin' - I need somethin' good to read when my gorram muse flits away!
Sunday, 15 October 2006 06:17
I dunno, stinkingrose...Jayne could still pull "River's certainly prettier than I last recall" given enough time. Sides...it makes for so much fun when these two get together;D

But to the topic at hand! This was briliant stuff, Jane0904! Totally gotta love Mal's conversation with Freya and Simon's discussion with Jayne about River:D

BEB
Monday, 16 October 2006 11:36
really enjoyable especially Jayne and Simon in the infirmary

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