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Curiosity - Part 2

Thursday, October 12, 2006

Second and final part. Broken into two for length. Feedback, please!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3704    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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“It don’t look no different to any other moon,” Kaylee said, watching the image of Tetris as they slid on by.

“That’s terraforming for you,” Freya replied. “Makes everything look the same. Just like the Alliance. It’s only in the little details that you can spot the differences.”

“Like the mines being lethal to women.”

“Like that.”

“So how’re we gonna do this?”

“Well, I'm hoping these scans will give me some ideas, but right now I intend swinging Serenity in a wide arc and parking on the far side of that other moon.” She tapped an irregularly shaped rock on the screen. “There’s gullies big enough to hide her in. Then I take the shuttle.”

“You take?” Kaylee looked at her friend sharply. “What do you mean – you take?”

“I’m going in alone, Kaylee. I thought that was understood.”

“No, it ain’t. I'm coming with you.”

“No, you’re not. You’re staying with Serenity.”

“To do what? Worry myself to death? Freya, they’re my family too. I'm not staying here.”

“You are. Kaylee, we’ve already had this conversation. I'm not putting you in harm’s way, and that’s a fact.” She put on her lieutenant’s voice, but this time it didn’t work.

“You’re not my captain!” Kaylee shouted. “You can’t order me around!” Her face was flushed.

“Kaylee, calm down,” Freya said, putting her hand on the young woman’s arm, mindful that this wasn’t doing her any good at all. “In your condition –“

Kaylee pulled her arm away. “My condition? I'm pregnant, Freya, not broken.” A tear slipped down her cheek. “You need me. You need my help. And I won’t just sit here.”

“Kaylee, listen to me –“

“No.” She radiated stubbornness. “And don’t think you can sneak onto the shuttle and take off without me knowing.” Freya started guiltily. “I'm coming with you. We need to bring them home together.”

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Freya checked the drip running into Zoe’s arm, and ran her eye over the makeshift connections. She’d done the best she could, linking several bags of saline and vitamins to hang from the ceili

Comments
Thursday, 12 October 2006 22:23
Okay, now don't get me wrong - I love Freya and all of our BDHs, but this one lost me a bit ... I think the idea of Tetris and the mine air that was dangerous only to women was a great locale/inanimate nemesis, but I feel like it needed even more time to be explored ...

Also, why do I have the sinking feeling that Kaylee's baby may have survived, but won't necessarily be healthy now?
Thursday, 12 October 2006 23:49
This was shiny as for wondering if Kaylee's baby will be okay we can't know that until it's born. All Simon could say was that the baby hadn't died. The second part felt a bit rushed but other than that it was a great story, thanks. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 13 October 2006 07:58
Valid comments - I just find it hard sometimes to keep the momentum going for longer stories, and tend to want to finish them. But this may not be the last we've heard of Tetris ...
Sunday, 15 October 2006 00:02
I personally didn't think it was that badly rushed...a tad bit compressed, but nothing horrible;)

And why do I get the feeling the angst bus just picked up another group of passengers? Cuz Simon's wording of his response to the crew's inquiries make me agree with Alison and TambSibling...things are suddenly a lot more difficult than they once were:(

BEB

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