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Matters of the Heart - Chapter 4

Tuesday, October 10, 2006

Mal/Inara centric fic.
When an old face from Inara's past arrives on Serenity, will Mal be able to handle the competition? Will the two finally be able to get over themselves and admit their feelings for one another?
(Sequel to "Loyalties"...spoilers to prequel included!)

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2494    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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The traditional obligatory offering to Boss Joss. Love his work, got bored, and decided to to run with it!

This is a story co-written with a very good friend of mine, aka DeanWinchester here at FF.net. Humor, smut, jealousy, with just a dash of angst thrown in later chapters to make things interesting. ;-D Bask in the Mal/Inara-ness!

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Inara lay back on the silk burgundy coverlet adorning her bed, laughing out loud for the first time in a very long while. Feyden was seated across the mattress from her, equally overcome with laughter at their amusing stories from their time as children.

And you call me a demon!” Feyden insisted with a chuckle. “The looks that you got from the training house instructors when you went barreling in there…”

Inara shook her head, pointing at the young man sharply. “Now, you’re the one that brought up the dare in the first place! You’re just as at fault for that damage as I was! You didn’t have to follow me in, you know.”

“No of course not,” he shot back sarcastically. “Not after you threatened me.”

Inara’s mouth gaped open in shock. “I have no idea what you’re talking about.” She bit back a guilty grin.

Feyden eyed her critically. “Don’t give me that. Back in the day, you were quite the rotten little zhao shi zhe!” Inara quickly lifted herself up on her elbows, smacking the boy ruthlessly in the arm. “Ow!” He yelped out with a smirk, rubbing the sore spot on his arm gently. “Still as violent as ever, I see,” he muttered with a smirk.

Inara rested her cheek against her hand, looking up at Feyden from her spot on the bed. They let themselves calm down after a little while, and a relaxed silence filled the room. Feyden caught the stillness in her expression, and lifted a hand to brush several strands of her ebony hair from her face.

“Seems as though it’s been far too long since you were able to laugh like that.”

Inara narrowed her eyes at him jokingly. “Am I that transparent?” she asked with a

Comments
Wednesday, 11 October 2006 00:42
Wow, intense!!!
Wednesday, 11 October 2006 01:02
The scene at the end with Mal and Inara was great - I could definitely see her hauling off and finally hitting him - he had it coming.

And I do love Mal and Inara, but he's being such a hun dan ... someone needs to give him a wake-up call ...
Wednesday, 11 October 2006 01:29
Funny when I read this I kind of see Mal's side of it. Inara said some pretty nasty things to a proud soldier who so obviously cares for her.
Wednesday, 11 October 2006 01:41
my bad...i forgot to put in the final couple paragraphs of this! :(
Friday, 24 November 2006 00:00
I don't think of Jayne as this petty, but other than that I enjoyed the chapter. Mal and Inara's fight riled me up some, but that's just because your writing is so good I get wrapped up in the story.

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