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Loyalties - Chapter 9

Tuesday, October 10, 2006

(post-BDM) Still considered "armed and dangerous" by the Alliance, the crew is hunted by a ghost from Mal's past, who leaves Simon Tam no choice but to decide who he would rather save; his sister, or the love of his life...

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The traditional obligatory offering to Boss Joss. Love the work, got bored, and decided to to run with it!

This is a story co-written with a very good friend of mine, aka DeanWinchester here on FF.net. Action, adventure, drama, sweet Kaylee/Simon stuff, and BIG DAMN hints of Mal/Inara.

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There was no time to react, not as everything still whirled around them in a storm of violence and gunfire.

Tearing away from Mal, Inara lifted her pistol, taking a stray shot at Draedon and hitting him in the shoulder. The commander dropped his pistol in shock, knocked sideways to the ground.

The thug bursting towards Mal was met with a flying fist strike to the face by Inara, who’s sprinted forward to cut him off. The lumbering man recovered quickly, taking a thick swing at the Companion’s face.

She broke the blow defensively, trapping his wrist between her own as she twisted her arms together. Inara lifted a knee up abruptly, striking the man square between the eyes, and then punched him in the face, effectively knocking him out.

She winced as the skin on her knuckled split at the impact against the thug’s nose, but she paid little mind to it as she sprinted back towards Mal’s fallen body.

“Mal!” She called out, panic-stricken. She stumbled to the ground, gently rubbing a hand on Mal’s back. She carefully turned Mal around onto his back, and she saw the two bullet holes, blood pouring forth from each wound.

“Oh God…” This wasn’t happening, she though in a rush of dread. She pressed her hands into the bullet wounds, applying as much pressure as she could, but the blood was pumping out of him too strongly. He was going to bleed out. “Wuh do tyen,” she let out in a sob, “Mal? Mal!”

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Kaylee’s voice whipped her back into attention, and as she lifted her head, she caught the last glimpse of Mal taking several shots directly to the stomach. “Cap’n!” She screamed out in horror as he hit the ground hard.

Simon put his arm

Comments
Tuesday, 10 October 2006 12:57
Hooray, our gang is all together again. So glad that Draedon and all his evil henchmen are dead and I had to cheer mightily when his ship was blown to smithereens! Now just have to get everybody all patched up again though I'm thinking it will take some time for simon to come to terms with having knowingly killed a man. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 10 October 2006 19:26
Okay, hurry and save Mal's life ... and poor Simon - I can't believe the good doctor finally took a life, although for Kaylee something tells me he'd do it again!
Thursday, 23 November 2006 20:18
I'm going to trust that you won't kill Mal and thank you for the chapter. It was a rare treat to see Inara in (rough-em-up) action.

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