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Loyalties - Chapter 8

Tuesday, October 10, 2006

(post-BDM) Still considered "armed and dangerous" by the Alliance, the crew is hunted by a ghost from Mal's past, who leaves Simon Tam no choice but to decide who he would rather save; his sister, or the love of his life...

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The traditional obligatory offering to Boss Joss. Love the work, got bored, and decided to to run with it!

This is a story co-written with a very good friend of mine, aka DeanWinchester here at FF.net. Action, adventure, drama, sweet Kaylee/Simon stuff, and BIG DAMN hints of Mal/Inara.

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Several minutes later, on board the Moriarty, Draedon stood in front of the view screen, grinning with veiled satisfaction at Simon’s answer.

“I know this must have been a difficult decision for you, but I knew you would see reason, Dr. Tam.” Draedon gave a nod to several guards, who stepped out of view.

Simon sat quietly in front of the com screen. He had fixed himself up since the first conversation with this monster. He changed shirts and vests. His hair was nicely combed and pushed back. He wanted to show this guy that he wasn't turning him into some mess when on the inside Simon was dying slowly. His hands were folded in his lap and head held up high.

"Reason?" He asked somewhat confused by what this man saw as reason.

“I will send you the coordinates that you will arrive at.” Several moments later, a set of coordinates, located on one of the outer moons in the system, was sent to Serenity’s computer. “I trust you can find your way there without further delay.”

This was blackmail. He cleared his throat and nodded. "That won't be a problem." He said his gaze holding that monsters in the screen.

“Well, that’s very civil of you, Doctor,” Draedon offered with an appreciative nod. The boy was surprisingly calm, considering he was about to give his sister over to what he thought was the Alliance. The commander had to respect Simon for that, at least.

"Just make sure Kaylee is unharmed. My sister will have to be put under. There is no way your men could handle her alert and well. I'm sure you've heard of her run in with those Reavers. I trust you don't want that happening." He reached out slowly ready to sign off when he was ready. "I’ll bring her. The both of

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Tuesday, 10 October 2006 05:29
I hope chapter nine arrives soon!!
Tuesday, 10 October 2006 05:35
hahah actually...
Tuesday, 10 October 2006 12:37
I really want something nasty to happen to Draedon and not quickly either. I loved the way River, Zoe and Jayne finished off the bad guys on Draedon's ship. Inara going to help Mal and Simon was unexpected but also threw a kind of back handed spanner in the works because while it distracted the men taking the Captain down it then meant Mal had to get Inara out of the way of deadly fire. Please tell me Draedon and his remaining henchmen get what's coming to them? Preferrably with River, Zoe and Jayne coming down to finish them off. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 10 October 2006 12:38
Oh, almost forgot to mention how cool it was to see Simon take down some of those *hundan*, hope he and Kaylee will be okay. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 10 October 2006 19:20
Yay for the big damn rescue ... gotta love that!
Thursday, 23 November 2006 20:03
Not the way I saw it going down, but this version is much better than what I saw in my head. I guess that's why you're doing the writing.

I can't get over how well you write action. It's difficult to coordinate several people in an action scene without confusing the reader, you do it well. I'm quite jealous of your skills. And quite happy that the next chappie's already up. :D

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