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Shadow, Part 2

Friday, October 6, 2006

A Pirate Children story. Mal's going home.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1800    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Title: Shadow

Rating: pretty G for now

Characters: the whole crew, plus toddlers Kacey and Lolly, Baby Abey

Pairings: Heavy on the M/I, trying not to neglect the rest of canon (S/K, Z/W, J/Vera)

Summary: Set 4 years post-BDM, Mal and the crew has a job on Shadow.

Author's Note:

For those confused by the children and this world, please read the rest of the Pirate Children stories (here in chronological order): Brother, Shadow (this one), Pirate Children, and Hell-Raising. This story is going to be multi-chaptered, along the lines of PC. After all, that one is about Inara going home; this is Mal's turn. Nothing too awkward yet, but there is more to come. Also, this is the first of the stories where the children are not featured prominently (it's hard when they're 1, 2.5, and 3.5) and poor little Serra isn't even born yet. She's feeling a little neglected. But I'm very nervous about my adult characterizations, so be nice! :)

Part 2

“He’s coming in this afternoon?” Laney’s eldest daughter questions loudly over the flock of squealing Reynolds-Stokes children who are high-tailing it out of church, wrinkling and dirtying their Sunday clothes in the grass and mud of the churchyard. Hannah, heavy with her third child, keeps one eye trained on her two rambunctious boys (she’s been praying for a girl) and another on her mother beside her.

“Yes. After lunch. We’ll be cooking all afternoon.”

Laney is bright, glowing over the impending return of her nephew to Shadow. Hannah smiles at her mother, hands supporting her burdened lower back, but is more wary of her cousin’s arrival than her mother. She remembers the dark, broken young veteran who attended her aunt’s funeral, while Laney remembers the mischievous little boy who helped the Reynolds-Stokes boys chase Hannah and the other girls around the cotton fields, brandishing snakes and toads.

“He’s taking the crop to Three Hills?” she asks. “Trying for the regular transport job?”

“Yes, wouldn’t that be wonderful?”

Hannah tries to smile rea

Comments
Friday, 06 October 2006 23:53
Yay for Pirate Children ... I think you know that I absolutely adore these stories - they are so heart-warming, even when it's sad or tense ... I love the idea of Mal finally having to face his past.

And the imagery is just great - everything seems so unbelievably real ... more soon, please!
Saturday, 07 October 2006 00:20
So very happy that Mal does have a family to go back to. With all the pain and sorrow of the war it is a relief that Shadow is still in one piece in this story and the family multiplying and prospering. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 08 October 2006 06:33
i like our first glimpse of the reynolds clan. seems like such a fun family to be a part of--as families not ours often do hehe. loved the interaction between mal and the babies, and inara/abe are too cute. would like to see inara sit down for a one on one with mal's aunt, and perhaps learn some more about his mother. speaking of mal, where is he? hope he's gonna be okay with all this. looking forward to more!
Monday, 09 October 2006 06:54
Wonder if Mal and Abe are off having a male bonding moment by themselves? Cuz it would hilarious to see what Captain Tightpants is telling his son;)

BEB
Sunday, 21 January 2007 23:30
Oh my gosh. This whole chapter reminds me of the few summers I spent in Louisiana with my cousins, including the dumping of food right on the table and those massive oak trees. There's a picture on my wall of all 8 of us kids lined up on one giant branch of an 800 year old oak tree. I love this "deep south" world you've created. Happy memories indeed, AWindsor.
*Rushing off to read the next chapter.*

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