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Power - Part 1

Wednesday, October 4, 2006

Next in the Mal/Freya/Inara story ... and can I just say 'thankyou' to everyone who leaves feedback - good is great, and not so good helps me enormously!

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A bar, like a thousand others. Music is playing in the background, and various nefarious types are lounging at the bar or sitting at tables. The atmosphere suggested a fight may break out at any time, but this is not unusual. Our nefarious types are sitting at a table in the back, watching all the newcomers.

“I seem to do nothin’ but wait around in places like this,” Jayne grumbled.

“It was my recollection that you seemed homely in places like this.” Mal finished his beer and put the mug on the table.

“I am. It’s the waitin’ that makes me nervous. Been too many lately where nothin’s come of it.”

“Well, this is a good bet. He’s not let us down before.”

“Always a first time.”

Attempting to relieve the dampener Jayne was trying to put on things, Freya picked up the jug to refill her mug, but found it wanting. “I’ll get a refill.” She stood up and headed to the bar. She heard the conversation continue behind her, and half-smiled. Mal was in a good mood, with the first decent prospect of a job on the horizon for weeks, and he wasn’t letting Jayne get him down. She reached the bar and held out the jug. The barman took it and began to pour. The vidscreen above was showing something from the Cortex, as usual, and it caught Freya’s attention for a moment, then she looked harder. As the barman put the jug on the bar, slopping some of the contents, Freya asked, “What date is it?”

The barman looked at her, bored out of his skull. “March 30th.”

She smiled. “In which case –“

Back at the table Zoe was berating Jayne. “I don’t know about you, but I like getting paid once in a while.”

“So do I. It’s just –“

“You going through the change?” Mal asked, grinning widely.

Jayne looked shocked. “Am not!”

“Boys, boys.” Freya had got back to the table, a tray in her hands. “No fighting. Not yet.” She put the tray down in the centre of the grubby wood, and stood back. Everyone stared suspiciously at the glasses containing a brown liquid clustered together.

“And what is the o

Comments
Wednesday, 04 October 2006 10:25
Okay a ton of queries coming. If this tweaked Maice guy is after Freya why target Simon in the bar? And when Mal was telling Freya who was taking which shuttle he didn't mention Kaylee or River, yet when Serenity goes back and Zoe boards she finds the ship empty implying that when Mal and Freya took the ship down to the mining planet that there was only the two of them on board, so where did Kaylee go? Or was she just forgotten until you needed to bring her back into the story to try to fix the ship? And how come Kaylee nods that yes she can fix the lock out when nobody could do it before? I also can't wrap my head around why Freya would stop the crew getting control back of the ship when she has effectively gone down on a suicide mission taking Mal with her? Also, why did they not take more care going to the compound, knowing an evil warped man with more money than God would be waiting to play with them? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 04 October 2006 11:36
Amdobell, not sure if you're likely to read this ... but a lot of these points will be cleared up in Part 2! I admit I didn't specifically mention Kaylee was on the shuttle with Jayne and Zoe, but it is mentioned that River is with Inara and Simon, and Mal is clear that everyone gets off but him and Freya. But I do agree it isn't as clear as maybe it should be, and I'll also admit the fact that they were some way from the compound isn't obvious!
Wednesday, 04 October 2006 15:02
interesting please continue
Thursday, 05 October 2006 01:21
I guess Mal anticipated the crew trying to get back to them with an unlocked Serenity...but the issue of Inara's shuttle being under Simon's control (unless Inara decided to go rescue Mal and Freya by herself) does make things interesting. If that's the way things have gone;D

BEB
Saturday, 19 January 2008 02:31
hey, she shares my birthday. happy birthday freya! and me! shiny work by the way.

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