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Dreams of Home

Tuesday, October 3, 2006

Next in the series after Blues and Greys, and Resolution. Mal considers the future ... Feedback, as always, is welcome and needed!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3703    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Simon looked out from under the awning into the sweeping storm, drumming on to the cover above them and dripping into runnels on the already sodden ground. “Do you think it will ever stop raining?”

Freya shrugged. “Probably. Eventually.” At Simon’s look of confusion, she laughed and went on, “Something went kerflooey with the terraforming. It rains a lot here.”

“Kerflooey? Is that a technical term?”

“Yeah.”

He shook his head, then grimaced as a rivulet of rain found its way inside his coat. “People must have become waterproofed, then.”

“You land here, you’ve got no way of getting further, so you make the best of a bad job.”

“Very pragmatic.”

Freya shrugged. “People adapt. You can get used to anything given long enough.” There was a beat. “So I understand.”

“I’m not surprised Inara decided to stop off at Persephone. And I don’t want to get used to it. There isn’t one part of me that isn’t wet.”

“I'm sure Kaylee won’t mind stripping you off and rubbing you down when we get back.”

Simon blushed a little, still finding his emotional attachment to the young engineer something of an enigma, particularly when spoken of in that fashion by this woman of many worlds. To cover his confusion, he posed a question that had been prodding his subconscious for some time. “I wanted to ask you – how long have you known Mal?”

“Oh, a long time. A very long damn time.”

“How did you two meet?”

“Well … you know he was a Browncoat?”

“I had gathered that.” He rubbed his jaw unconsciously. He still remembered the powerhouse Mal had delivered when he had dared to suggest the Captain was an Alliance stooge.

“So was I. He volunteered because he thought he could save his world. I joined because … I knew I couldn’t. And because I wanted to kill as many of them as I could.” Freya shrugged and looked into the young man’s eyes, wide with disbelief. “I was angry. Over what they did to me. I‘m not proud of it, Simon,” she added quickly. “Besides, it wore off pretty fas

Comments
Tuesday, 03 October 2006 10:12
Gorramit, you stopped before Mal and Freya kissed, a thousand curses! I really liked this though Jake's reason for not helping Mal was so lame it should have been put down at birth. Ranchers who can't fire a gorram gun? That isn't likely. I'm damn sure if trouble had come calling on Mal and his mama's ranch they would have face a fair few guns chambered and ready to drill nice neat holes where their beating hearts would have been. No wonder the Captain decided not to stay after that, fine neigbours they would have been. Besides, why would anyone ever want to leave Serenity? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 03 October 2006 13:23
Yeah for the drama and tying up lose ends ... all of these stories are so satisfying because you draw them to a close ... although I'd love to see you write something longer - but that's just me, being selfish.

Loved your Simon/Kaylee moments, although Simon's closeness to Freya has me a bit on edge ... no messing with canon, dong ma?
Tuesday, 03 October 2006 17:39
Doubt Jane0904 is trying to mess with canon, TamSibling;)

This was one brilliant piece of work here, Jane! Definitely found the BDHs to be on-spec and full of depth. Gotta agree with the ladies above me though...Jake Templeman was a bit too weiner-ish to seem a proper cattleman. Any person running cattle generally learns how to utilize weaponry, if only to drive off wild animals;)

BEB
Tuesday, 02 October 2007 16:18
I do like me some action! Fun story and enjoyable character development.

:-)

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