Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Christmas Present

Monday, October 2, 2006

Just a little story set after Blues and Greys. Feeback is much appreciated!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3563    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Mal had asked Freya at the end of November what she wanted for Christmas, since it was their first together. Properly together, that is. She’d moved her stuff in with him, and now her incense burner and statue sat next to his shaving equipment on the shelf. He’d managed to get used to the scent, although it had been a near thing.

They had actually spent a Christmas together once before, during the winter campaign outside New Casmir, but they weren’t exactly alone. Nearly a thousand men and women from both sides were dug in around there, and no-one had actually felt like celebrating too much. Not with three feet of dirty snow and no food to speak of. They had sung carols when they figured it had gotten to the actual point of midnight, at Mal’s suggestion, and he had revealed a rather pleasant voice that sang the old words with sincerity, and flowed through her like melted toffee. He’d been surprised at the strength of her voice too, and had found he’d wanted to hear more.

“So what do you want?” He pulled his boots off, sitting on their bunk. “Within reason,” he added quickly.

She smiled at him as she undid the buttons on her shirt. “There’s nothing I want,” she said, revealing glowing flesh that entirely took his mind off what he had just said.

Two weeks later he tried again, slightly more gingerly as he had managed to get himself a little wounded in the meantime on their last job. This time they were in the galley, and he sat down with care at the table. “Come on,” he said. “I hate not knowing what to get a woman. I’ve had some uncomfortable experiences in that department before, and I’m hurting enough as it is.”

Freya put the cup of coffee down in front of him and sat in the next chair. “There’s nothing I need.”

“You are a singular woman, Freya,” he said, dumbfounded. “I have never known a woman who couldn’t tell me exactly what they wanted, usually with a full description and a price tag. You ain’t normal.”

She smiled. “That I’m not.”

He leaned forward, suppressing a sl

Comments
Monday, 02 October 2006 11:16
Ah, I really loved Mal's gift to Freya and was so glad he got her something even though she had said not to. Hope there are more stories to come and I also loved River and Jayne singing and all the other details. Very shiny bauble to hang on my Christmas tree! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 02 October 2006 18:09
Good for Mal that he doesn't listen to his stubborn woman and still got her a gift!

And good for Simon - seems he was able to suss out what Lil' Kaylee might want. I thought the insight into all of their gifts was great. I've nver been able to write a Christmas fan fic, just because it seems so incongruous out in the black, but this one was one of the best I've read.

More stories with Freya and our interpid crew, please!
Tuesday, 03 October 2006 00:03
Glad to know Mal ain't gonna fall for the "You don't have to get me anything...honest!" schtick. Cuz Lord knows he would have gotten an earful (or the opposite) for failing to give a present to Freya;D

BEB
Monday, 25 February 2008 04:06
I loved the gift!!
Saturday, 19 April 2008 19:10
~~~~~I've got you something,” River said.

For a moment Jayne was non-plussed, then a disturbing feeling crept over him. “Ain't nothing dead, is it?”

She laughed and walked away.~~~~

Made me laugh and laugh. I'm your new biggest fan. I hope that didn't sound stalker-y.
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