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Shadow

Sunday, October 1, 2006

Another Pirate Children Story. Set 4 years post-BDM AU. Mal, new wife and son in tow, returns home to Shadow. Let the awkward ensue.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1972    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Title: Shadow

Rating: pretty G for now

Characters: the whole crew, plus toddlers Kacey and Lolly, Baby Abey

Pairings: Heavy on the M/I, trying not to neglect the rest of canon (S/K, Z/W, J/Vera)

Summary: Set 4 years post-BDM, Mal and the crew has a job on Shadow.

Author's Note: As has been stated in earlier PC fics, I'm playing with Mal's and Inara's histories here. In this fic, this means that Mal still has family on Shadow and that Shadow isn't a dead rock, as I've heard tell. I'm working on two other PC stories at the moment, but this one is getting the most attention. I know people wanted more of the kids (and they'll get them eventually) but I wanted to try my hand at more of the series characters this time. It's an experiment. Please be constructively critical.

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Laney Reynolds Stokes lives a simple life on Shadow. She and her husband run a cotton plantation on the river with their six children and ten grandchildren (and counting, liable to be eleven any moment now). She wasn’t raised to be a cotton planter, but after marrying Silas Stokes, heir to the largest plantation on the St. Mary’s River, she left the grassy ranch of her youth, taking her younger brothers, Jack and Emmerson, along. Her younger sister Margaret stayed on the ranch, raised a little boy of her own, and passed away shortly after the War of Unification. Despite the size of the plantation, the Reynolds-Stokes family live moderately, working their own fields alongside hired day laborers and making most of their own clothes. Life is just simpler that way, and Laney’s family has always been about simple.

She doesn’t think about Maggie very much, doesn’t have time to between playing matriarch, seeing to the books, and stopping her grown brothers’ squabbling, but every time she does think of her baby sis, she wonders on the nephew she hasn’t seen since his mama’s funeral. The boy disappeared the moment the funeral was over, stoic lady friend in tow, and hasn’t been home since. From the few times she saw him growing up, she knew

Comments
Sunday, 01 October 2006 06:23
ok, the only thing that felt "off" with this is just how many damn kids are running around. Where are they all sleeping? Logistics is throwing me for a loop.

Aside of that little detail, I really enjoyed reading this. I love the nuances and backstory to Mal and his family... and would love to see where it goes. Post more soon!
Sunday, 01 October 2006 08:51
Big Mal/Inara shipper. Post MORE!
Sunday, 01 October 2006 11:24
Really love this though I had to backtrack from the story you wrote where Abe is older and able to talk. I can't wait to see Aunt Laney's reaction and the kind of reception Mal, Inara and the children get on Shadow. Maybe the visit will help Mal to heal over the loss of his mama too. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 01 October 2006 13:38
I love your characterization of Mal and Inara. I know I'm always talking about how much I love Abe and Mei-Mei, but it's really the entire family life you've created for all of them that I love. Post more - I can't wait to see Mal come face-to-face with his family and I'm sure more than a few ghosts.
Sunday, 01 October 2006 17:49
as usual, i love your writing, AWindsor. adore mal with little 'bubba.' can't wait to see what happens when we meet aunt laney and co (and when they meet inara). somehow i'm not too worried about inara fitting in--she does seem to be able to charm the pants off just about anyone. literally lol. looking forward to more crew interaction in this one too.
Sunday, 01 October 2006 18:27
Ooh...family reunion! That's gonna make for some fun times;)

Really can't wait to see part 2 of this, AWindsor...cuz I get the feeling that this will not quite be as smooth as most of us would hope. Not if it's multi-sectional;D

BEB

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