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Monday, September 25, 2006

Over breakfast the next morning, the crew finds out just what Mal's dare was. Sequel to 'Kiss'.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3907    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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This is part of a prompt table I am working on. All the stories from it are standalones unless otherwise noted.

And I discovered when writing this that giving every character something to do is really HARD! No wonder why I rarely do it!

Thanks to Tamsibling for the beta.

Takes place before the movie but after the series.

This is for Kaynara, who wanted to know what Mal dared Inara to do.

Sequel to http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=13087>Kiss.

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62.Wet

“So how ya holdin’ up there, doc?” Jayne’s leering grin nauseated Simon as he deposited the bowl in front of River and then took a seat beside her.

“That would be none of your business, Jayne.”

Jayne examined his face carefully, “Ya look tired. Lil’ Kaylee keep ya up all night?”

“Slept like babies, didn’t we, Simon?”

Both men winced at the perky and cheerful sound of Kaylee’s voice as she walked over to the kitchen and scooped some protein into her bowl.

Jayne glanced from Kaylee to Simon and back again, trying to piece together what the two weren’t saying. He quickly grew frustrated, which amused Simon so much that he had to pay closer attention to River lest Jayne see the smirk that had formed on his lips.

Kaylee pulled out a chair and sat herself down beside Simon but there was no intimacy between them. In fact, it seemed quite the opposite. Boy seemed even more nervous around the mechanic. Which Jayne found more than a little amusing. Something happened, and he was going to make it his mission for the day to find out what. Grumbling his irritation as he realized this meant he might actually have to be nice to the doc for the day, he left the table to go re-fill his bowl.

“Frustrated,” River said as she poked at the protein cubes with her chopsticks.

Simon glanced back toward where Jayne had gone and grinned. “He – can’t have actually expected us to have anything to tell.”

Kaylee simply stared into her bowl.

River rolled her eyes at her brother, clearly annoyed

Comments
Monday, 25 September 2006 16:49
“I wouldn’t talk, doc. You went to bed with my mechanic last night.”

Love that line, I copuld really see the look on Simon's face.

Still plenty of UST around though, look forward to the next part.
Monday, 25 September 2006 16:55
I love this for the express reason that Mal is the one in the hotseat ... it's about time!

Plus the discomfort between Simon and Kaylee, while perfectly in character is just heart-breaking ... those two ... I can't wait to read "Heart."

And I love your Wash voice, especially when interacting with his wife, they really are the perfect foils for one another ...
Monday, 25 September 2006 16:57
Lot of Christian undertones with that concept, aren't there;)

This was quite hilarious, if only because Mal gets wound up tighter than Simon does usually and the payoff's just brilliant;D

BEB
Monday, 25 September 2006 17:51
Ah, honey, you made my Monday morning. I can feel the discomfort radiating off Mal and Simon.
Monday, 25 September 2006 18:38
There are people without ticklish feet? Weird.

And what does Simon have to be embarrassed about? Not only did nothing happen, but 50% or more of the crew is rooting for him, anyway.

But still, there's 6 more nights in Kaylee's bunk. He can't hold out forever under that kind of pressure.
Tuesday, 26 September 2006 03:31
Her proximity easily warming regions he’d rather keep quite cool.

for some reason i just love that line.

this was very cute though i can imagine the foot spa going another way entirely. must be that dirty imagination of mine! looking forward to more of our favorite crew acting like teenagers lol.

oh yeah, and i'll get to work on that closet scene ;)
Tuesday, 26 September 2006 06:12
Love it!
Tuesday, 26 September 2006 14:02
Poor River, always trying to give Simon some subtle help and him always missing it by a mile.

Yay for Wash's chipper attitude and sunny disposition.

Zoe had wanted to continue the game, so his plans to have his way with his warrior woman were delayed for the more amusing game of ‘embarrass the Captain’.
~ BWAHAHAHA !!!

“Cap’n has ticklish feet?!”
Mal frowned. “Doesn’t everyone?”
“No,” came the response from five of the eight other people present.
~ It kinda makes me wonder who the other 3 are :)
Tuesday, 26 September 2006 15:22
Not what I was expecting when I saw the fic title, given your history... :)

Very enjoyable banter and funness! You did include everyone, and I totally agree - that ain't easy! Especially that Book guy. ;)
Thursday, 28 September 2006 23:31
Personally, I liked the prequel better but good nonetheless.
Sunday, 01 October 2006 07:36
hehe, also very nice, sigh and i do wish something had happened between simon and kaylee, just like they do and i'm sure everyone else that's read the story

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