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A NEW DAY, ch. 9: Common Ground

Saturday, September 23, 2006

Set three months after A NEW BEGINNING. Simon has to make a choice and at the same time refuses to forgive his sister. Jayne and Regan watch River deteriorate and Rylee meets her grandfather. S/K, R/J, M/I

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A/N: Thanks to all who have been reading and responding. BEB - your comments crack me up!

Here's hoping that this chapter is also "feedback-worthy!" Please read and respond ...

And thanks once more to Leiasky for - well, you know.

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A NEW DAY, ch. 9: Common Ground

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Jayne found Simon making notes in a chart in the clinic, his eyes darting to the monitors around his son and back to the book. Entering and closing the door quietly behind him, he wasn’t sure the younger man had heard him until he finally said, “Go away, Jayne.”

Shaking his head and grimacing at the back of the man’s head, Jayne told him, “Not ‘til we talk about your sister.”

Still not facing him, Simon continued to write and said, “There’s nothing to talk about.”

His patience wearing thin, Jayne approached him and said heatedly, “Gorramit Simon, you can’t blame her for this.”

At that statement, Simon’s entire body tensed. Placing down his pen and standing up to his full height, he turned slowly to regard his brother-in-law and Jayne took a step back involuntarily at the anger that burned in his gaze. Jayne had never, not once, been intimidated by the doc, but that look in his eyes certainly made the mercenary reconsider his position on just how deadly Simon could be.

“I can’t blame her for this?” he asked coldly, incredulously, crossing his arms over his chest and leaning back against the counter. “I don’t think you are in any position to tell me what I can and can’t do.” Holding Jayne’s look for another moment, Simon again turned to his chart and added, “And she most definitely is to blame for this.”

Having no other choice and little patience, Jayne allowed his frustration to boil to the surface. Grabbing Simon by the elbow, he whirled him back around and bit out, “Damn it Simon, how she was ‘sposed to know this was gonna happen?”

“She didn’t,” Simon retorted, his eyes still blazing. “But I did. I knew it would end badly and you know who it always ends badly for – me and

Comments
Saturday, 23 September 2006 02:31
Wonderful.

I feel for Simon, Kaylee, and Danny.

I am glad that River finally came out of her trance and I know they'll get Rylee back.

I just love this story and hope you post Chapter 10 soon.
Saturday, 23 September 2006 02:43
'She felt a small twinge of hope that maybe her grandfather, although she had never met him until today, would help her.'

That line tore my heart apart.
Saturday, 23 September 2006 03:53
aswesome. You have done such a good job with this. Boy I hope we see some light at the end of the tunnel soon though....This angst is getting hard to take.
MOMIN8R
Saturday, 23 September 2006 04:06
oh, poor rylee! i've been lax with the commenting, but i've read every chapter of each of these stories....i will try to do better with the comments! so very sad, sad, sad....make it stop!!!!!!!! and so glad river snapped out of it....can't wait for more! :D
Saturday, 23 September 2006 04:54
Every time I see Gabriel Tam appear...I hope for some tiny flash of compassion or love or even humanity. But all I see is some sort of psychopathic freak who should have been locked away years ago to prevent him from harming people, especially his wife and children. All he sees is promise of legacy...of eternal memory. But he fails to realize that a lot of people have been added to the history books for being tyrants, demagogues, serial killers, fools, cowards, and traitors. Remembrance isn't always about joy and promise...:(

Honestly, I would give anything to see the Jayne/Simon moment filmed. Just to watch Sean and Adam just take this concept and make it the epitome of anguish and fury being only controlled by a short thread of restraint. Especially to see the moment when Sean/Simon just totally eclipses Jayne in pure intimidation...and the utter despair that Jayne/Adam would have when he watches as his brother-in-law condemns the woman he risked his entire life to rescue to the pits of insanity for what she inadvertantly did to punish Simon, Kaylee and their children. Oscars, Emmmys, SAGs...the awards would flow in and prove that these characters (with your words and Joss' direction) represent unfathomable portrayls of people put into dire straits and forced to make choices that are definitely gonna be regretted later on. And we would know first hand...for we are the Apostles to your Enlightenment, TamSibling. It would be gorram shiny;D

BEB
Saturday, 23 September 2006 05:49
I just love to see Simon so passionatly upset about something. His arguement with Jayne was so perfect. And that Daniel came in and calmed him was an excellent end to that scene.

Hate Gabriel so much. And Regan is going to make the upset Simon listen to her? He needs some kind of relief soon or he's just going to crack under all the stress.
Saturday, 23 September 2006 09:08
Wow, angst abounds and you have written Simon's reaction so very well. I can see him so tied up with anger and desparation, made more intense by the fact that his sister was the one to bring this down upon them albeit the last thing she ever intended. Not sure why River didn't know her father would try to pull something. I hope Regan can pull them all together so they can work on a gorram plan. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 02 October 2006 12:32
Good buildup to the inevitable confrontation that is to come, hopefully it will all work out for the BDHs despite River's grave mistake.

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