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New Ties (version 2)

Thursday, September 21, 2006

I wasn't happy with the original story, so here is a rather drastically amended version. The first few screens are the same, but, please, if you've read this before, bear with it! Still the sequel to Old Ties, and Inara confronts Freya over Mal. Feedback, please, good or bad.

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Inara sought out Freya, finding her on the bridge, staring out at the stars.

“Are we going to make it to Highgate?” she asked, stepping over the sill. “I’d hate for us to be drifting.”

Freya turned in her seat and smiled at the Companion. “No, we’ll be shiny. Mal’s arranged to refuel there, so everything’s fine.”

“Fine.” Inara repeated. She moved forward. “Could you bear for some company?”

“Sure,” Freya said, pointing to the co-pilot’s chair. “Take a pew.”

“We’ve never really talked, have we?” Inara asked, sitting down gracefully, her bright brocades in extreme contrast to Freya’s flannel shirt and serviceable trousers.

“Not really,” Freya agreed. “You want to now?”

“Well, I've nothing better to do. Do you?” She smiled kindly at Serenity’s pilot.

“What do you want to talk about?” Freya asked, sitting upright a little more, running her hands through her short dark hair to make it lay flat. She couldn’t help it – this woman always made her feel inferior.

“Oh, I don’t know,” Inara said, looking out at the expanse of space. “How about your ship?”

“My ship?” Freya laughed. “I don’t have one anymore. Not even worth towing to the scrap belt.”

“Do you miss it? Being captain, I mean. It must be difficult taking orders again, even from Mal.”

“He’s okay,” Freya asserted. “Better than some I've known.”

“Worse than others?” Inara suggested.

“No. Not really.” Freya laughed again, a deep throaty chuckle. “There’s a few I would cheerfully have put out the airlock, if you must know. It’s been a while since I felt that way about Mal. Not saying it won’t happen, but not so far.”

“Really?” Inara took a breath, wanting to stay on the subject in hand. “Wouldn’t you like your own ship again?”

“You mean leave Serenity?”

“Start afresh. New horizons.”

Freya looked at her. “You’re not talking about my boat, are you?” she asked.

“I'm just talking, Freya.”

“No, you’re not.” Freya turned the seat so she could look at Inara fully in the face. “You’re sugg

Comments
Thursday, 21 September 2006 16:16
nice i liked it better than previous version please keep writing i want to know what happens with this triangle i know in other stories you mention Freda is Mal's lover and Inara is gone
Saturday, 23 September 2006 01:26
Never read the first version, but I definitely loved this one;)

Honestly good to see Inara actually expressing some honest feelings for Mal, though her attempt to bribe Freya seemed a tad heavy-handed. But that's probably the point. She's used to be able to diplomatically persuade people into doing things. Freya isn't the kind of person she deals with, so her down and dirty is really non-existant. Gotta wonder though when the shoe drops that Mal finally decides Freya's the one and Inara can only be a friend...

BEB
Thursday, 27 September 2007 19:26
Good interaction between these two! I'm still trying to get a clear handle on exactly where Freya is coming from, and how her talent will affect relations on the ship.

:-)
Sunday, 05 July 2009 05:47
Gotta learn to share.

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