Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Old Ties

Tuesday, September 19, 2006

This follows A New Beginning, which told how Freya becomes part of the crew. Now it's time for Mal and Inara ... Feedback would be great!

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“Can I come in?” Mal asked from the doorway to shuttle one.

“Please,” Inara called, putting the tray she carried down on the side and pulling her skirt down into a smooth line. She looked up to see the captain of Serenity standing looking at her.

“Hey.”

“Hey.” Inara smiled. “You don’t normally ask.”

“Well, I guess things have changed a mite.”

“And you haven’t been in here since I moved back in. And that was several weeks ago. I thought you were beginning to wish I hadn’t.”

“No. Not …”

“Oh.”

They gazed at each other for a moment longer, then Mal conspicuously looked around the shuttle. “Didn’t take you long to put it all back,” he said.

“Well, I know where everything goes,” Inara said.

“That’s new, though,” Mal commented, pointing to a large brass table lamp that gave a warm glow to the surroundings.

“I bought it on Sihnon. I haven’t used it until now.”

“Right.” He looked back at her.

“Would you … would you like some tea?” She indicated the tray.

“No. Thanks.” He seemed to be searching for the right words. “Inara –“

“Then sit.”

“Yeah.” They both sat down, a safe distance apart. “I was … we’re going to be arriving at Highgate in about an hour, if Freya can make the fuel cells last. We’ll be taking on cargo then be off again.”

“Oh? Well, there’s not really any call for a Companion on that planet. Where will we be going after that?”

“Beaumonde. You’ll be able to … I'm sure you have clients waiting.” He didn’t look at her.

“A few,” Inara admitted. “I can make a few appointments.”

“Yeah.” Suddenly he stood up, surprising her. “I have to go. Do captainy things.”

She got to her feet a little slower, more gracefully. “Of course. I quite understand.”

They were only a foot or so apart. “What you’ve done … it’s nice to have it back the way it was,” Mal said quietly. “I kinda missed having it occupied.”

“I'm sure you could have found someone to rent it from you,” Inara responded, her voice barely above a

Comments
Tuesday, 19 September 2006 21:50
very nice!!! you got the characters really well! particularly when you didnt hav Inara give up being a companion. more very soon please!!!
Thursday, 21 September 2006 04:24
Oh...I hope Inara isn't gonna do something rash. Cuz that would not make Mal rush into her arms...only ensure the gulf stays wide and deep:(

Still...I certainly can't wait to read of how Inara decides to "do something" in concern to Freya;)

BEB
Thursday, 27 September 2007 19:15
Yes, this is good tension between the characters. I'm sure Inara will do something and Freya's reaction will be very interesting.

:-)

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