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Hell Raising: Part 2 of 2, a Pirate Children story

Friday, September 15, 2006

"I just wish you would’ve killed the old bastard.” – Inara, War Stories. Eighteen years later, so does Mal. Set in the same 'verse as Pirate Children, but three years later. This one is darker than the first.

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Title: Hell Raising

Rating: PG-13 for mild torture and violence

Pairings: heavy on the M/I, by the nature of the 'verse, references to S/K, Z/W, Jayne/Vera

Setting: 18ish years post-BDM

Summary: “I just wish you would’ve killed the old bastard.” – Inara, War Stories. Eighteen years later, so does Mal. Set in the same 'verse as Pirate Children, but three years later.

Author's Note: Thanks for the great response! Here's the second and final part of this little story. There will be more in the 'verse, so stay tuned.

Part 2

Mal slowly makes his way back to their shuttle, relieving Lolly and a fairly calm Kaylee from their duties and sending them to bed with the bare outlines of the plan. That’s all he has so far. The crew is going to meet in eight hours for further discussion.

Inara’s still asleep, so Mal removes his boots quietly, tucking them aside so no one will trip, and climbs gently in beside her. Nausea settles heavily in his stomach, tears stinging his eyes again. He puts an arm around his wife, burying his face in her hair, trying hard not to think about how similar it is to little Mei-Mei’s.

He half-sleeps, dreaming of his children’s bodies, and wakes instantly when Inara stirs beside him three hours later.

“Mal?” she questions, shifting onto her back.

He meets her eyes in response, and they immediately fill with fear at the hollow look she finds.

“Mal, tell me it was dream…”

“Ain’t much for lyin’ to ya, darlin’,” he says as gently as possible, one hand tucking a curl behind her ear.

She feels nauseous, a kind of fear she’s never experienced before, worse than the multiple times she’s seen Mal’s life in the balance. At least then, she’d seen it.

“We know where they are; we’re headed there now. Gonna mount a rescue, kill the hun dan, and get them back to you. But you’re stayin’ on the ship, dong ma? Can help Lolly and Kacey with the defendin’, but I don’t want you near that place. You ain’t gonna like where we find them, how we find them. I ain’t gonna like it, neither, bu

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TIMBOLECTABLE
Friday, 15 September 2006 21:48
i very nearly cried. that was beautiful.
Friday, 15 September 2006 22:19
That was amazing - I am so glad Abe got to kill Niska, although I feel awful about what that will do to his sensibilities.

Amazing - please write more of your pirate children!
MAI
Saturday, 16 September 2006 04:45
This was an amazing story. I love the 'verse from the children's point of view. It's heart breaking in a way, for what they each have to go through, but true to what it would be like if children were raised in that environment. I hope there are more "pirate children" stories to come. :)
Saturday, 16 September 2006 07:15
“Stay with us, dong ma? When we get back, you can join the Niska club with me an’ Uncle Wash; we’ll trade stories.”

oh, so wonderful--all of it. the relationship between abe and serra is beautiful. i love mal's speech to his son, and inara's simple, loving reaction to having her babies back. you write mal and inara as parents so well.

in a way, this was one of the most traumatic stories i've ever read in the 'verse. there's a certain level of horror attached to niska anyway, but when he takes children, especially a child serra's age....i love the way you handled this tale, both parts. thanks, and i can't wait for your next one~
Saturday, 16 September 2006 11:13
Wow, this was terrific. Everything flowed brilliantly and I have to put hand on heart and confess that I cheered when Abe killed Niska. It felt right especially because he had been the one being tortured to death by that evil *liumang* this time. I just hope someone really made sure he was dead when they got Abe out of there. And is is just me who felt all kinds of creepified that they were going to keep Serra and raise her as their own? How totally twisted is that? Great story, want more! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 19 September 2006 02:15
Ya know...it doesn't surprise me that Niska and his wife wanted to keep Serra for their own...or at least Mrs. Niska did (no idea about what ole Adelai thought;D). Cuz you have to be either stone cold or nuts to wanna be/stay married to Adelai Niska:S

And while it's painful...I am glad it was Abe who ended Niska's life. The trauma will sit hard on his heart, but it will only make him that much stronger in his desire to heal and protect from now on;)

BEB

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