Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Time to move on - part II

Wednesday, September 13, 2006

This is in response to a comment about my previous story from Leiasky wondering how Simon would give Kaylee a piece of his mind for not doing what she was told! Not strong, but ... tell me what you think!

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Kaylee hummed quietly to herself, something she’d heard somewhere, and it stuck in her mind. She didn’t know what it was, didn’t care. It was pretty and it made her feel happy.

“Are you ever going to do what you’re told?” Simon said from the doorway to the engine room.

The young mechanic turned to smile at him. “Are you going to tell me off?” she asked. “Don’t. I just wanted … I needed to make sure she was okay. I mean, the Cap’n don't know how to do anything ‘cept fix a catalyser, and the only one anywhere near decent in the rest of this crew is Hank, and he’s a pilot, not an engineer.”

“That doesn’t mean you should be here.” He stepped across the threshold. “I told you to rest. If you wanted to come here you should have asked me.” His voice was gentle, but his meaning was clear.

Kaylee bridled a little. “So I gotta ask every time I want to do something?”

“Not every time, no. Just when you want to do something stupid like go on board a leaky boat and fix an engine that nearly kills you,” Simon said, inadvertently letting his worry show as anger.

“I didn’t know there was a radiation leak!” Kaylee protested. “Anyway, Jayne got me out of there.”

“Only because he knocked me out first,” Simon said.

“Oh.” Kaylee lifted her eyebrows in surprise. “Nobody told me about that.”

“He hit me, and with more force than was entirely necessary,” Simon explained, touching the lump on the back of his skull where it was still tender.

“You were going to charge to my rescue?” Kaylee asked.

“Of course.” He looked at her. “Did you think I wouldn’t?”

“I …” She looked down at the engine part in her hand. “No-one said. I thought the Cap’n -”

“It didn’t get that far,” Simon interrupted. “Mal was about to give orders, I said I was going, then Jayne hit me. Next thing anyone knew he was out in the airlock and fighting his way to you.”

Kaylee smiled sweetly. “I’ll have to thank him.”

“You already did,” Simon pointed out. “Twice.”

“He saved my life, Simon. You should be ha

Comments
Wednesday, 13 September 2006 16:17
OMG, Simon trying to act all forceful and chastising Kaylee was funny. I do like how uncomfortable he was with it all and how playful Kaylee was.

And that he forgot to close the hatch and Mal/Freya ended up hearing was just icing on the cake.

Nice work.
Monday, 18 September 2006 05:40
Oh...this was totally amazing, Jane0904! Definitely loved Simon trying to be all serious and domineering...but failing miserably because of Kaylee's behaviour;D

BEB
Monday, 19 February 2007 13:18
psml! so funny! i love that mal n freya could hear everythin n he was so embarressed anyhow! nice one jane!

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