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A NEW DAY, ch. 3: Family Ties

Wednesday, September 13, 2006

Set three months after A NEW BEGINNING. River and Simon still cannot see eye to eye and Kaylee's health takes a turn for the worse. Simon/Kaylee, River/Jayne, Mal/Inara

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3403    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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A/N: I hope you all are enjoying this story as it continues to build. If I haven't mentioned it before, it has about 33 angst-filled chapters and a fairly long epilogue that should tie up any loose ends.

Thanks again to Leiasky for the beta.

Please continue to read and respond, it helps me know if I'm on the right track!

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A NEW DAY, ch. 3: Family Ties

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“Daddy, can I talk to you?”

Simon looked up from his text, another one on pregnancy and multiple births, to regard his daughter’s small face. Smiling to her, he waved her towards him and answered, “Of course, sweetheart. What is it?”

Crawling up and into his lap, Rylee sat with her hands folded in front of her, a very puzzled expression gracing her young features. Smiling at her still, Simon ran a hand through her hair and waited for her to collect her thoughts; he knew she would.

“Daddy?” She looked up to him again with those big brown eyes and Simon felt his heart stop for a second. She was his beautiful baby girl and like any loving father, the minute she called him ‘daddy,’ he was a goner. “Why’s everybody so mad?”

Simon’s breath caught in his throat as he remembered a day, long ago, when Kaylee had uttered almost those exact same words. Shaking the memory away, he met her steady gaze and asked, “What do you mean, Ry?”

Sighing a bit at having to explain herself, Rylee held up one hand and started listing all the cases she could think of. “Well, aunt River’s mad, at you, I think, and you’re mad at her. Mama’s not mad, she’s just really sad all the time and kind of scared and uncle Jayne – he’s always mad at somethin’.”

Simon chuckled a bit at her assessment of her uncle, agreeing wholeheartedly, but his mind quickly drifted to what she’d said about Kaylee and taking her face in his hands, he asked quietly, “What do you mean mama’s scared? Do you know something, sweetheart?”

With even wider eyes, Rylee looked him in the face and shook her head quickly. Not wanting to alarm her, Simon droppe

Comments
Wednesday, 13 September 2006 08:30
Not sure why Kaylee is having such trouble carrying the babies but hope it does not mean anything awful is going to happen to them or her. Very worried about River being so sneaky and single minded about getting to her father to help her have children. Sounds like a recipe for all kinds of disaster that will embroil the diminishing crew. And then there's the job on Boros which may or may not go smooth. Hmm, lots to fret about. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 13 September 2006 11:15
She was his beautiful baby girl and like any loving father, the minute she called him ‘daddy,’ he was a goner.
~This is why I am glad that I only have sons, because if I had a daughter I would be putty in her hands.

The growing River/Simon angst is good, especially with the fact that it is now affecting Rylee, which is just a natural side effect of it, given her abilities.

“I think I may have found someone who can help me find it.”
His own eyes clouding at the vagueness of the statement, Jayne asked concernedly, “Who? And am I gonna have to hurt ‘im?”
~I love how Jayne's thinking immediately goes to what he is best at. :)

leaving Jayne feeling more lost and actually wishing, probably for the first time ever, that Simon were here so he’d at least have one ally
~At this point, with that reaction from Jayne, I am going to have to agree with some of the other readers' assesment that River is going to far in her attempt to have a child

I would not want to be in Simon's shoes when he breaks the news to Kaylee about going to Osiris without him.
Wednesday, 13 September 2006 15:06
I actually love the growing tension between Simon and River. I think its definitely something that would happen as the two of them matured and began to have their own families. Of course, River being the bright killer woman that she is would be far more difficult, and Simon being a smart pigheaded, prone to guilt man would add to that difficulty.

I'm looking forward to Kaylee's reaction when he tells her about his plans to send her to Osiris. Poor Simon is going to get it from all sides and with his little girl wondering why everyone is so mad and Kaylee's pregnancy being so difficult, I wouldn't be surprised if the poor man has a breakdown!
Wednesday, 13 September 2006 19:57
I think River is making a big mistake contacting her father, she could be jeopardizing the job.

I hope Kaylee will see eye to eye with Simon and go to Osiris.
Friday, 15 September 2006 23:45
Oh...I so pity Jayne and Simon's mutual situation right now. Both men are married to mighty strong women who want to follow a path that will put their lives and the lives of others in danger. Been wanting to see how Simon and Jayne interact with each other for a while, and I was hoping this series will flesh out their (presumably) closer relationship than the BDS or BDM had them possessing:(

Though I am mighty impressed with the amount of angst flowing around in this storyline, TamSibling. Definitely can't wait to see how things take a plunge for the cellar next;)

BEB
Saturday, 16 September 2006 03:41
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