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Hell Raising: Part 1 of 2, A Pirate Children story

Wednesday, September 13, 2006

"I just wish you would’ve killed the old bastard.” – Inara, War Stories. Eighteen years later, so does Mal.
Set in the same 'verse as Pirate Children, but three years later. This one is darker than the first.

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Title: Hell Raising

Rating: PG-13 for mild torture and violence

Pairings: heavy on the M/I, by the nature of the 'verse, references to S/K, Z/W, Jayne/Vera

Setting: 18ish years post-BDM

Summary: “I just wish you would’ve killed the old bastard.” – Inara, War Stories. Eighteen years later, so does Mal.

Set in the same 'verse as Pirate Children, but three years later. Author's Note: This one is darker than the first, but since in my heart I write fluff and family drama, it's probably fairly light compared to most "dark fics". Thank you to everyone who read Pirate Children. Anyone who wants to read this one and not the first should know, first that Wash is still alive but Book didn't survive the BDM. Also, they should know the new characters:

Killian Cobb "Kacey" Washburn

Leila Lee "Lolly" Tam

Abram Derrial "Bubba" Reynolds

Serra Alleyne "Mei-Mei" Reynolds

and their tutor, Alistair "Ally" Caramia, who's been aboard since Serra was born.

Part 1

“Hey-hey! Amnon!”

The postmaster looks up to see two fairly familiar faces, a tiny young girl and her teenaged brother, walking side-by-side, close enough to touch, heads bent conspiratorially.

“Well, if it isn’t the Reynolds children, Trouble and More Trouble.”

“Now, which of us do you think is More Trouble, Amnon? I know the easy answer is me, but Abe has that whole smart thing going on, which I think really tips the scales in his favor.”

She’s shorter than the counter, so her brother lifts her up to sit on the edge, he himself leaning against it.

“Oh, but pretty Miss Reynolds, you have a streak of mischief which has no equal. Are you two here to pick up Serenity’s post?”

The girl grins beautifully at him. “Yup yup. Did I get anything shiny, Amnon?”

“Well, there are several packages addressed to Miss Serra Reynolds. And about as many for Mr. Abram Reynolds. Do we have some recent birthdays?”

“I turned fifteen a month ago,” Abram answers, signing for the crew. “Mei-Mei turned ten last week.”

“Well, happy birthday to you both. Are you going

Comments
Wednesday, 13 September 2006 02:38
Awesome! While I hate the thought of Niska getting his hands on Mei-Mei and Abe, I love the way this is written ... I think you captured Inara's pain perfectly and Mal's. This would be so incredibly difficult for them.

I cannot wait to read part 2 - thanks for giving us more stories of the pirate children!
Wednesday, 13 September 2006 05:02
I agree with TamSibling--awesome. Inara's reaction was perfect I think--she's very strong, but this is too much. Mal is better at detaching in a way--he can shut down and go into hero mode. But when his children are involved....Honestly, I'm kinda worried about what will happen when he sees Serra. I'm not sure he can survive that--seeing his innocent little girl hurt. In a way, that could be as devastating as losing the war. Anyway, please post part 2 soon, kay? I heart the pirate children. ;)
Wednesday, 13 September 2006 09:11
*Ai ya*, what an utterly twisted piece of *goushi* Niska is. I know we already knew that but to have Niska deliberately target the children because he can't get to or isn't man enough to go after Mal is beyong the pale. This is incredibly written and I am hanging on every word hardly daring to breathe. Please don't let that evil *liumang* kill the children and I pray Mal kills Niska this time. Don't care if it's long or slow so long as he is dead. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 17 September 2006 03:05
This is sick, twisted, demented, heartless, obscene and a whole slew more of adjectives that will never be used positively. But I am loving it to bits, AWindsor:D

You are definitely visiting the Whedon School of Dramatic Writing with this. Maybe not matching the founder's skill with the dark and the emotional...but you're at the back of the class here. Really can't wait to see what kind of lingering issues will arise once the crew saves Abram and Serra...and makes sure that Adelai Niska never has the opportunity to do harm to another soul again:S

BEB

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