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Thick. Chapter H: Shifting Ground.

Sunday, September 10, 2006

Mal makes a plan; Inara calls him on it. Simon is in a good mood, until reality kicks in. River tries showing instead of telling. And Jayne tries to talk his way out of a situation. Jayne: Hero of all Dirtworlds? Is it too good to be true?

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1924    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Thick. Chapter H: Shifting Ground.

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* Characters and world belong to Mr. Whedon and co. Mistakes and follies, my own.

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“We get word yet?”

“Naw, Captain, not a one.” Mal did not speak his frustration. Wash was busy reading over spaceport news; Milagros’s atmo was always tricky. Full of storms and powerful winds. Another reason it had stayed off Alliance radar. Purplebellies too lazy to deal with it, Wash thought. Thank the ‘verse for some constants.

“We got a plan, here?” Jayne asked. Leaning forward over the various world sheets spread across consoles. Wash slapped at his hand.

“Don’t play with the grown-ups’ work.” Jayne moved his hand back to retaliate; Zoe stood up from her leaning posture against Wash’s chair; Mal cleared his throat.

“Not rightly sure. Jayne knows the land, might point us in some direction. If we don’t hear from the doc. Figure it’s best, leaving Ledah somewhere’s medical. On Milagros. Where’s a problem. But, we’ve still got to take our cargo to Santo. Could scout around there a bit. Things look good, wave her back, tell her to move on.” Jayne nodded along with Mal’s unfurling idea. Liking the simplicity, the leaving complications behind them.

“Leave them there.” It was Zoe, though, that spoke to the heart of Mal’s plan.

“Girl’s trouble ain’t ours. Reckon we’ve done more than she asked, if we get her to a clinic.”

“She paid for a ride to Santo.”

“She lied about going to Santo, Wash. And, if I recall correctly, boy needs help now, not three days hence.”

“Wouldn’t take—”

“Enough. She stays here. Only question is where, and how we get her there. And what we do when we get to Santo. We clear?” Zoe again replied:

“Clear, sir.” And she shot Wash a warning glance. But Mal knew the difference between obeying an order and believing in it. Not that he had the luxury to fix that issue right now.

“Preacher, think you can handle escorting the lady through, whatever this town’s called, where we're landing? Find her a doc?”

“I’m not

Comments
Sunday, 10 September 2006 20:23
Excellent chapter once again. Now just what spooked Elias enough to make him demand SImon leave?

And that message from Simon and River's mother. . . that was unexpected! So much for poor Simon's plans for Kaylee's birthday.

And I loved Inara's conversation with Mal. So very perfect!

Cut back to posting once a week? Oh, definitely not something a devoted reader wants to hear! :)I'd be far happier with a post once a day. . . laugh

Do what you need to, I'll read regardless of when you post.
Sunday, 10 September 2006 23:05
Oh intopaper...you certainly know how to mess around with our BDHs with the best of them;)

I especially loved Mal and Inara's little back-and-forth about Danny's condition and where they should set down. Mal just can't catch a break when it comes to Inara, can he? Lord knows the man struggles day in and day out with things like keeping the crew fed and fairly compensated without having runaway widows with sick children needing urgent medical attention tying up his time. And now Jayne's past has got them all bound by law. Makes ya wonder what will finally drive Mal completely around the bend without hope of recovery;)

BEB

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