Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Thick. Chapter G. Bad Connections.

Thursday, September 7, 2006

The crew’s got complications, not the least in communicating. And they’re not the only ones. For, while Simon has an unstrange, unstrained conversation, in this 'verse, when something goes well... somewhere else goes all to... pieces. Zoe and Wash non-talk; Inara remembers. Mal captains.

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Chapter G. Bad Connections

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*Characters and world belong to Mr. Whedon, mistakes and folly my own.

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Kaylee closed the door of Shuttle Two. She pulled her gold and red blanket around her shoulders; it was one of Inara’s last gifts. She had trailed it behind her from the engine room, knowing the shuttles were always cooler than the ship, especially when shut down. She was glad for the layer. It always warmed her. Pulling a crate over to the console, she keyed up the cortex screen. Pressed in the numbers and characters Inara had left and in moments, was looking straight at her.

“Ni hao,” she said, then Inara’s face changed rapidly, moving from smooth planes to a smile that made her eyes crinkle and dance at once.

“Hey you,” was all of her extended greeting. Kaylee managed to reply the same back. “Well, how are you?” Inara prompted. “How are plans going for your birthday? I hope Mal is doing the right thing and landing on a decent world somewhere, so you can get a real meal, maybe go dancing.”

“I don’t know, ‘Nara, but I’m fine. How are you? Ping an? That’s a real pretty necklace you got on.”

“Do you like it? I stole it from Sheydra,” she said, leaning into the screen and whispering confidentially.

“No, not you ‘Nara.”

“Truly. You all rubbed off on me, I guess.

“Oh ‘Nara,” Kaylee started to cry. “I’ve done a horrible thing. And I don’t know how to fix it, neither, what with Simon being gone and the Captain so upset all the time, talking ‘bout things he ain’t meaning. He don’t listen, like he... But, I don’t deserve a thing. ‘Cept to be shipped off home. Or to jail. For being a thief. A liar and thief, thievin’ from friends and trepassin’ on what I know to be private.”

“Kaylee, mei-mei, you couldn’t possibly have done anything so wrong. What’s got you so worked up? Did Mal say—”

“And,” she hiccupped, “and I went and let Ledah on board, and now she’s here for good.” Inara’s eyes narrowed. “And Zoe’s mad about it, same as the Cap’n were, least, ‘til he heard her st

Comments
Thursday, 07 September 2006 20:23
Ohh, well, this is shaping up to be a real good story. Can't wait to see what Elias does with those waves.

I loved Kaylee's conversation with Inara. I could really see it in my head. And now Inara thinks Simon and River have left Serenity. . .

Well done. Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter!
Friday, 08 September 2006 03:44
This was a great chapter. I really enjoyed Inara’s back story as well as finding out the truth about Ledah. Sometimes I just want to shake Simon.

Good luck with the typing. I am anxiously awaiting H and I and J etc.
Sunday, 10 September 2006 22:39
Oh...I so get the feeling that Elias dumped those waves when he got them at his cabin. Cuz either he wouldn't recognize the crew right off the bat or he heard Ledah's name and made sure Simon didn't find out:(

Inara's backstory: interesting bit of speculation. Not sure how to interpret Mrs. Serra. She's not evil, controlling (blatanly) or obsessive about social ranks. Though she does spout a lot of social "lessons" that seem rather mindless and without use, if you ask me;)

I just hope that Danny can hang on till they get to Milagros:S

BEB

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