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A NEW BEGINNING, ch. 28: Knowledge is Power

Friday, September 8, 2006

CONCLUSION to part 2 - Set four years after A NEW LIFE. River and Cadie come to an understanding, while Kaylee finds out about Inara's accident. In the end, River decides to go after what she wants, possibly endangering everyone she loves. Simon/Kaylee, River/Jayne, Mal/Inara

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A/N: As promised, here is the conclusion to part 2 that sets up the third and final installment - A NEW DAY.

A NEW DAY will focus heavily on River and Jayne while also staying very close to Simon, Kaylee, Daniel, Rylee and the new babies, as well as Mal, Inara and Mimi. It also holds the return of two familiar characters from an earlier installment and the very real threat that things will irrevocably change for our BDHs.

Thanks to all who have stuck with this story and I hope you will follow me on to the third part - A NEW DAY. Thanks also to Leiasky for way too many things to list here.

Enjoy and continue to read and respond - please!

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A NEW BEGINNING, ch. 28: Knowledge is Power

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River awoke a few nights later while it was pitch black outside, the new moon invisible overhead. The room was dark, but like a beacon, she could feel Cadie’s pain and confusion radiating out to her. Lifting her head from Jayne’s chest, River glanced towards the bed and watched as the girl thrashed about, obviously in the grip of a horrific nightmare. Getting up, she crawled towards the bed, and placed her hand against her cheek lightly.

“Cadie, baby, wake up,” River whispered to her, running her fingers through her hair lightly.

In an instant, Cadie’s eyes snapped open and she met River’s concerned gaze with a fearful one of her own. Breathing heavily, she blinked a few times to clear the tears that had formed and murmured, “Mama, it was bad.”

Smiling slightly at her, River continued to run her fingers through her hair soothingly as she said, “I know.” Laying her head down on the bed, River and Cadie stared at each other for a few minutes, neither of them saying anything and neither of them really having to. Their ability to communicate with one another had long ago transcended speech and truthfully, they only used words now in order to not unnerve Jayne.

With a sigh, River continued to stare at the beautiful little girl as her eyes again drifted closed. “I

Comments
Friday, 08 September 2006 03:21
Ohhh, well, now, I get the feeling we're going to have Simon and River at odds. Ohh, the tension and the angst, especially if she puts Simon's family in danger!

Good place to end it, and set up the next story:)
Friday, 08 September 2006 07:17
'Oh God Yes!' and at the same time 'Oh God No!'.

Pleeeaaase hurry and post A NEW DAY. I must have more. Gorram this is good. Damn near too good.
Friday, 08 September 2006 07:17
'Oh God Yes!' and at the same time 'Oh God No!'.

Pleeeaaase hurry and post A NEW DAY. I must have more. Gorram this is good. Damn near too good.
Friday, 08 September 2006 07:17
'Oh God Yes!' and at the same time 'Oh God No!'.

Pleeeaaase hurry and post A NEW DAY. I must have more. Gorram this is good. Damn near too good.
Friday, 08 September 2006 07:17
'Oh God Yes!' and at the same time 'Oh God No!'.

Pleeeaaase hurry and post A NEW DAY. I must have more. Gorram this is good. Damn near too good.
Friday, 08 September 2006 07:25
I don't know what's going on, but it would appear I just posted the same thing four times. I wasn't even finished with my praise.

Apologies, but I can't seem to delete it...stupid gorram computer.
Friday, 08 September 2006 08:28
excellent finish..but I could just shake River right now. I feel for her, but I never would have thought she could be so selfish...
Friday, 08 September 2006 14:45
I cannot wait to see how this turns out.
Friday, 08 September 2006 17:15
Oooh, sparks flying between River and Simon? Didn't see that coming. Kaylee's reaction to Inara's loss was very in character, her need to go and comfort her friend having to be curbed for the time being because Inara doesn't want them to know yet. That is going to be a hard silence for her to keep. And poor River, so wanting to have children she will risk anything. Great to have Zoe back on board too. Roll on A New Day! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 08 September 2006 20:48
Sleeping there wasn’t a whole lot she could get off of the big man, but she had felt his love for her, his willingness to protect her and keep her safe plenty of times before; it was one of the emotions Jayne felt most clearly, along with his love for River and his dislike of Simon.
~I love that all of his love for them is coupled with his dislike of Simon, good stuff.

Cadie shook her head, even as more tears came and she said, “Maybe someday, but not now.” Unable to hold back her sobs, she leaned heavily against River and murmured, “Don’t hate me.”
= - O

Was it really possible that he had just completed his first wholly legitimate job without a hitch?
~BWAHAHAHAHA

“Well, then, permission to come back on board,” she asked him, forcing her voice to stay steady.
~I literally got chills when I read this, you can't possibly know how happy you have made me.

“I’m fine, mama. I’m just pregnant is all.”
~Talk about non-chalant.

YAY! for the River/Simon angst in the end, I cannot wait to see what happens there.
Wednesday, 13 September 2006 03:26
So it finallly happened, eh? Simon and River at odds over the possibility of allowing River to have children...and strong chance that obtaining that possibility means putting a lot more than just Simon or River's lives in danger. Gotta say...it's about damn time. This face-off has been percolating for quite a while...maybe even since the pilot episode's events. "Where will Simon draw the line?" and its ilk is definitely one of those big questions that never got a chance to be explored properly with the series' cancellation, if you ask me.

Still...this was mighty amazing stuff you've written here, TS. Definitely a season cliffhanger to beat some of the biggies from Buffy and Angel. Can't wait to see how you have this angst grow and lash out before (hopefully) being overcome in the end:)

BEB

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