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The Contract / Revenge 2/5

Wednesday, September 6, 2006

A little shootin’ practice, a little skinny-dipping and Jayne and Kaylee cook up some revenge on Badger...

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2780    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Title: The Contract / Revenge 2/5

Author: mercsgoodgirl

Disclaimer: Joss's toys, my make-believe. No money changed hands and all that.

Paring: Jayne/Kaylee

Rating: PG-15 for adult language, sexual references.

To read the other stories in this long Jaylee story arc, check out my earlier fic by clicking on my name above. This falls between "RED" and "Too Little, Too Late", post OIS, pre BDM. Compliment to my story, THE CONTRACT.

Dedicated to BlueEyedBrigadier, who challenged me to figure this one out. Thanks, BEB!

Technical assistance from my very own bigbadman, with beta by the lovely ArtemisPrime. Italics represent internal dialogue.

Nothing so pleases and inspires a muse as thoughtful and insightful feedback. Thanks!

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Their purchase made, Jayne went next door to the livery stable and rented a couple of horses for the afternoon, asking the stable keeper for directions to nearby open land where they could do some target practice. At the same time, he’d purchased some sandwiches and a couple bottles of beer that he tucked into a saddlebag.

He steadied the bay mare as Kaylee mounted up, then gathered up the reins to his tall sorrel. Putting a boot into the stirrup, he swung a lanky leg over and settled himself into the saddle. He neck-reined the gelding and nudged him to a smart pace, calling back to Kaylee, "Well, come on, darlin'."

It seemed to Kaylee that her senses were sharper than usual after the cool quietness of the gunshop, and she drank in the fresh air, enjoying the hypnotic rhythm of her horse's movements and the rugged beauty of the big man beside her.

The late morning sun was bright and warm, but a sweet, clean wind kept the day from being uncomfortable as Jayne and Kaylee cantered out of Troy and along a dirt track into the countryside. The mercenary was as confident on horseback as he was in a firefight. His narrow hips planted firmly in the saddle with his wide shoulders back,

Comments
Thursday, 07 September 2006 03:01
Wow... I really really love your fic. You are seriously in my top three fav. Jaylee authors. :)
I read "The Contract" first and then had to go back and read everything that you've written!!!
I mostly read them on Livejournal, but I wanted you to feel some love here as well. See, you aren't posting in a vaccum. ;)

P.S. I'm also from western NC, small world ain't it?
Thursday, 07 September 2006 03:20
Horray for target practice! And the swimming that follwed.

A tiny little thing, but one I liked alot: Mal and Zoe's reactions to Jayne's gun were well done. I just got this little mental picture of that exchange. I could direct that scene.
Thursday, 07 September 2006 18:19
Thanks, folks!

Nice to know you're diggin my fics, Sindra, and to hear from a fellow NC Browncoat and Jaylee fan.

And Reenie, my dear, I know how busy you are and appreciate you taking time to post. You commented: << Mal and Zoe's reactions to Jayne's gun were well done. I just got this little mental picture of that exchange. I could direct that scene.>> You couldn't give me a higher compliment. Aw shucks.
Sunday, 10 September 2006 02:31
Oh...it's only gotten better from part 1! Oh...I have to start praising the bejeesus out of fanfic authors more often:D

Amazing work here, HGG! Would have honestly given ya a 10...but I kinda got weirded out when you had Jayne channel Mal with his "Ain't I just?" line. Just have a problem or two trying to picture Jayne/Adam deliver this piece of dialogue;)

BEB

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