Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA

Those Left Behind Ch. 7

Sunday, June 6, 2004

Questions

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A/N: See Ch1 for Disclaimers. Thanks to Neroli for the beta help. One note, in my mind the name Sug is pronounced Shoog.

Chapter 7: Questions

"What are you going to tell them?" Zoe asked.

Mal turned to face her. Standing just outside of the infirmary, they were watching as Simon attempted to save the life of Tom Pollard. "Don't see that anything has to be said. Accidents happen."

"That's what you think this was? An accident?" she asked as she waved her hand at the image in the window. Simon had just stopped trying to revive the man who had apparently been paid by Blue Sun to follow Sal Tzernaky.

"Do you really think talking about it is going to change it? It's done with, we focus on the job and move on."

Zoe moved closer to her Captain when Book entered the lounge area. They both nodded to him as he entered the sick bay to administer last rites. Zoe resisted the urge to slap the man next to her. "Are you being purposely dense? We just saw River do what we'd all been afraid of. Thought you'd learned in boot camp that ignoring the unpleasant only gets you killed."

Mal looked her in the eye as he considered her statement. "She hasn't hurt a one of us Zoe. Moreover, I'm not about to ask Simon to prove his sister didn't kill that man. It was an accident and that is what the crew will be told. Now, have you got 'nother bone to pick with me or are we through?"

"You shoulda told me about Jayne."

Mal looked away from her as Simon exited the sickbay. He nodded to the doctor. "Your sis is in 'Nara's shuttle," he stated.

Simon nodded, but stopped in front of him. "Aren't you going to ask?"

Mal turned to Simon with a dumbfounded look. "Ask what?"

"How he died? Are you dense? And how did you know to give that serum to him anyway?" Simon demanded.

Mal clenched his teeth. Everyone wanted him to save River's little friends, but they all wanted to question how he

Comments
Sunday, 06 June 2004 20:09
Hmmm, is it just me or is River getting morbidly more creepifying? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 07 June 2004 07:37
Lots of great character insight moments, especially as regards the captain. Nobody appreciates a good killin' any more, what's the 'verse coming to? ;-) And the whole backstory bit about getting shot in the ass--nice!

Monday, 07 June 2004 18:28
Still a great story. Love how you've treated the characters. Write more soon!
Monday, 07 June 2004 21:58
Well, Jebbypal....you are on fire, hon!

This story keeps getting better and better. I'm loving the character interactions, with the plotting of the rescue, rings so true. And I agree, with AMOBell, River is starting to get really, really scary...but in a good way! LOL I liked the moment w/ Simon and her in the end. Very haunting...and sad. Gotta say I enjoyed the bit also on the interagation, wonderful job!

And I loved, loved the explaination for the tatto, can't wait to meet Sug...should be very interesting! *snickers*

Bravo!
Thursday, 10 June 2004 02:53
I told you this when I was beta-ing this for you, but I gotta say it again...this is one of the BEST Jayne lines I have ever read...
"How come I gotta? I didn't kill him."
...every time I read it I can hear him saying it, picture the insolent/confused look on his face, tipping the chair back just so...

Bravo on this chapter Jebbypal!! :-)
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WARNING-----DO NOT CLICK ON THE TWO LINKS ABOVE----SOME IDIOT HAS TAKEN TO POSTING LINKS TO A PORN SITE AND FOR SOME REASON KEEPS USING THIS CHAPTER TO DO SO!!!

I don't want to delete and reload the chapter due to all the shiny comments above..so consider yourself warned

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