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A NEW BEGINNING, ch. 23: What We Shouldn't Know

Wednesday, August 23, 2006

Set four years after A NEW LIFE. Mal saves the day - sort of - while River gives Simon and Kaylee some startling news about Rylee. And then, River receives some startling information of her own, from an unexpected source. Simon/Kaylee, River/Jayne, Mal/Inara

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A/N: Ah, yes, and we're back to the angst! Enjoy!

Thanks to Leiasky for the beta (even when she's not feeling well, she can still knock out quality comments - gotta admire that!)

Please leave comments, they make me happy!

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A NEW BEGINNING, ch. 23: What We Shouldn’t Know

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As Mal pulled the mule up to the small house at the edge of town, he eyed Zoe skeptically. Guessing at his hesitation, the tall woman hopped down and told him, “Save it. He’s legit, I’m tellin’ ya and pretty nice, too.”

Shaking his head as he pulled back on the parking brake to make sure the vehicle stayed put, Mal hopped off and followed her up onto the porch, wondering when exactly someone being nice had become a prerequisite for them to do business.

Turning to his friend as she rapped on the door, Mal told her, “Nice, huh? I’ll believe it when I see it.”

Zoe let the comment slide, choosing instead to keep her eyes locked on the wooden door. When it opened a moment later, and an older gentleman, shorter than Mal, but with a face hardened by years of hardship and laughter answered, she stepped forward and stuck out her hand. “Willis, it’s good to see ya.”

“Zoe,” the man greeted her warmly, taking her hand, and instead of shaking it as Mal had assumed, he kissed it lightly. Motioning them both inside, Mal continued to have doubts about this whole arrangement as he entered the inviting room. “It’s so good to see you,” Willis was saying, gesturing his guests to two armchairs, well-appointed for the smallish space.

As Zoe sat, throwing Mal a look that had told him he’d better do the same, she turned back to the older man and asked, “How are things?”

Willis looked to her and nodded once. “Can’t complain. Can I get you anything?” he asked, looking between Zoe and Mal. “Coffee, tea, water?”

His brain having lost all ability to function in light of such an odd turn of events, Mal could only stare at the man dumbly. Zoe answered for them both, “We’re fine, Willis. Thanks.”

Comments
Wednesday, 23 August 2006 03:32
Thank God! I knew at some point it would have to be addressed... but truth be told the whole River/miscarriage thing has been more under my skin than the other plot threads. Don't get me wrong, I've loved reading this (despite my crappy ability to leave feedback all the time). But read them and love them I do. It's just about damn time River got to address what happened to her and what she went through.

As always a most excellent chapter and I cannot wait for the next installment!
Wednesday, 23 August 2006 10:03
...wait ... we missed out on Rayne smut?!!? Will there be an interlude or something with it? ... just seems fair, considering S/K abd M/I gets their smutty moments published :P

And ooooohhh intrigue! Looking forward to the next chapter, want to find out what's on those sticks :)
Wednesday, 23 August 2006 11:09
there was nothing this woman could do that would make her regret meeting and loving her husband – well, nothing that he himself hadn’t probably already done.
~BWAHAHAHA !!!

The doctor had confirmed his worst fear just twenty minutes ago and that pain, the knowledge that Inara had lost their child, was still with him
~I hope Stef dies a slow and excruciatingly painful death. Igor too.

he actually stuck his tongue out at her, a completely un-Simon-like expression
~hehehehe very funny image

Yay for Regan's revelation/gift to River, I can't wait to see what kind of stuff you have in store for her.
Saturday, 26 August 2006 15:28
Shiny
Sunday, 27 August 2006 06:06
Oh...Stef and Igor are so friggin' screwed right now! Mal and the rest of the BDHs available are gonna hunt them down and make them wish for quick deaths;)

Really feeling sorry for both Inara and Mal right now. Losing a child before it's born? So sad and emotionally damaging. I just hope that Mal and Inara can help one another out until they can meet back up with Jayne and River...I really think they could help each other immensely:)

And I am glad you've come back around to address the questions about River's miscarriage. Mainly been thinking on the feasibility of River's loss being an Alliance "gift" to prevent unnecessary alteration to their spiffy weapon, since River's been through a number of high-stress situations before with less biochemical alteration. But then again...miscarriage is a big thing without involving govt. black projects :(

BEB
Tuesday, 29 August 2006 02:09
Ok, I'm back from my vacation and you get the distinct honor (I know, you're so happy :P ) of being the first story that I'm commenting on!

So River gets some info. . . and Inara looses her baby. . .

You add much more angst, people are going to think I'm influencing your writing!

I love angst!

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