Submissive
Tuesday, August 22, 2006
Mal upsets Kaylee and Simon benefits. *Adult Content* S/K
CATEGORY: FICTION TIMES READ: 4323 RATING: 9.0 (NC17) SERIES: FIREFLY
This is part of a prompt table that I'm working on. You can find it http://www.geocities.com/maegovannen/Firefly/69FicChallenge.html>; Here.
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29.Submissive
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Kaylee stormed up the ramp, her hands clenched into tight fists, her jaw set as she glanced around the empty cargo bay.
Before she could call his name, Simon appeared in the doorway that led to the passenger dorms, the smile that had graced his face upon seeing the mechanic sliding away when he noticed the look in her eyes.
“Kaylee?”
Before he could say anything more, she pushed him back against the wall and kissed him – hard. His eyes widened as her mouth possessed his, tongue plundering deep as her hands slid into his hair to tug him closer.
Simon could do nothing but stand there, hands resting gently on her hips, wondering just what had gotten her so riled up. He didn’t mind, of course, Kaylee was the most unabashedly passionate woman he had ever been with but it did make his overly bright brain curious. His body quickly reacted to her closeness, her scent, her demanding demeanor, and he groaned against her mouth as his pants tightened uncomfortably.
When they finally parted, Kaylee’s gaze swept down his body and the tip of her tongue darted out to trace his bottom lip as if she was licking away some imaginary liquid that had spilled there. A coy smile spread across her face as his entire body tensed, his eyes still wide as if he had just witnessed something horrific.
She kissed him deeply one more time before taking his hand and pulling him through the doorway toward his room. He didn’t hesitate, just followed like a man who knew he’d regret it if he said no.
Mal scowled at the two as he stood at the top of the ramp, arms crossed.
“What’d you do now, Mal?” Inara asked, gliding beside him on silent feet.
He answered far too quickly for it to possibly be true. “Nothing.”
“You’re not so good with the lying, Sir,” Zoe said as she walked up the ramp and passed the two, not stopping to explain.
GUH. What a LOVELY thing to come home from vacation to.
“Just call ‘em like I see ‘em, Sir,”
~hehehe these are great Zoe lines
The bit with River and Mal at the end of the first scene was wonderful.
“Not that I’m complaining but – what brought this on?”
~Ever the boob.
I am still not that big of a fan of the way you used 'sexed'.
“Stop talking.”
~As stated previously, ever the boob that man is.
and good fic. portrayal of simon was hilarious and spot-on, as usual.
*contented sigh* Nice and sexy and full of Silee goodness ... thanks!
Hmm, jiver. Maybe it's just me, but that sounds kinda dirty.
Always love your stuff, Leiasky. Keep it up!
Simon asking what brought on Kaylee's mood is smart.
What if it had been something HE did? That's NEED TO KNOW.
<<Kaylee wasted no time as she leaned down and kissed him, her hips rising and falling, meeting and retreating, as their tongues met and warred for dominance.>> i like this line too!
hell, i liked the whole thing! great job leia! :) yet again characterization was perfect (write river more often, i like seeing people who can actually write her well!)
He pulled away just enough to catch her eyes, fighting back the irrational fear that he’d upset her.
“Yes?”
“Stop talking.”
ROTFL! I love it! Sometimes Simon says the stupiest things, luckily this time it didn't deter Kaylee!
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