Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

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Friday, August 11, 2006

Kaylee tries to relax Simon. *set post series before movie* Oneshot.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3364    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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These stories are all standalone's unless otherwise noted.

Thanks to Tamsibling for the beta!

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9. Massage

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Simon frowned as he looked over the test results one more time. It was late and he should be in bed, but night was when he could concentrate the best. With River sound asleep, and no one on the crew needing him for anything, he could sit, read and re-read the notes he’d made over the last few months.

River had been doing better, but Simon didn’t really know why. Up until recently, he’d had to change her medications frequently. Her body had been breaking them down at an astonishing rate, but since he’d been shot, of all things, her psychosis had lessened considerably.

He shifted his weight off his injured leg and rubbed the back of his neck with the palm of his hand. He was a doctor, he fixed people. He’d done everything he knew how to do and used everything he had at his disposal. But, he wasn’t sure anymore if his little sister could be fixed, was even less sure that he would be the one to fix her.

So engrossed in his journal, he didn’t hear Kaylee poke her head tiredly into the infirmary. “What you still doin’ up, Simon?”

At the unexpected sound, Simon glanced up so sharply, he threw himself off balance and gripped the counter to keep from falling over. “I could ask you the same thing.”

“Ain’t no fair answerin’ a question with a question.” She moved into the room and only stopped when she was facing him, hands on her hips. “Ignorin’ your own orders?”

Simon grinned sheepishly at her and slowly closed the journal. “Doctors really do make the worst patients.”

She dropped a hand to his forearm and tugged gently. “Well, nurse Kaylee is here to make sure you start followin’ ‘em.”

Simon smiled so widely, Kaylee thought her knees would buckle. To her, there wasn’t anything prettier than tha

Comments
Friday, 11 August 2006 19:42
I love this piece for a variety of reasons - namely because it is damn sexy and sweet at the same time - and I think that's a great combo!

I love the idea of Simon "letting" Kaylee relax him and Kaylee trying to be a nursemaid. Something tells me Simon has quite a few "fantasies" about Nurse Kaylee ... Please it's great to see them have a moment where they aren't so uptight with one another ... just great all around - that Kaylee is a lucky girl!
Friday, 11 August 2006 23:32
Awww. Not that porn's not a good read, but sometimes a sweet little bit of fluff is even better to really feel the love. They're both so sweet.

And I'd wager Simon's not the only one around here with a Nurse Kaylee fantasy. What? *coughcough* Stop looking at me like that!
MERCENARYSONG
Saturday, 12 August 2006 05:10
Ok, not a Simon/Kaylee reader much but they are growing on me. I really enjoyed this. I liked the sweetness. You have great flow. You captured their internal turmoil and sexual tension right on. Very subtle...Thanks for sharing.
Saturday, 12 August 2006 06:16
That last line said it all. Very sweet! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 12 August 2006 12:11
good to see some romance that isnt just adult content, keep it coming.
Saturday, 12 August 2006 15:00
This was sooo sweet! I loved that Simon was distracted enouigh to let Kaylee inch her way in a little more. It's nice to see the developing romance, too bad Kaylee wasn't bold enough to plant a kiss on him, but I am sure you can write a very nice first kiss sequel to this!:)
Sunday, 13 August 2006 04:51
Oh...you definitely have the Silee fluff concept down to an art, Leiasky;)

Really liked how Simon and Kaylee were totally comfortable with each other, without Simon throwing out a misconstrued or garbled comment to ruin the moment. He's learning...slowly;D

BEB
Monday, 14 August 2006 10:18
“Yer real stiff, Simon,” Kaylee said as the palms of her hands pushed against his shoulder blades.
~Of course, my dirty mind can place this in another one of your stories, where it isn't his back she is massaging ;)

was that a new kind of tension was spreading through his body, one that her fingers were causing and would be unable to relieve
~That's not entirely true ;)

I liked this cute little story, and I am glad to see more of these prompts, as you didn't post very many of them and I am looking forward to the rest from this particular set. :)
Thursday, 24 August 2006 21:54
I liked this story. I think it was really sweet, romantic. Writing a sweet scence like this is one of the more difficult things to do - I have avoided it because it's so much easier to slip into the more "adult" themed stuff you usually see on this site (though I think folks that can write a good, romantic scene are far more mature than those who just write porn...)

Good job.

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