Blue Sun Room FILK - FILK
Heart pains
Thursday, August 3, 2006
MY 100TH POEM! flywithmecaptn gave me the name
CATEGORY: FILK TIMES READ: 2175 RATING: 8.0 (G) SERIES: FIREFLY
Open my door
Made you a home
My home
Made space
Made excusses
Gave you room
Not only in my house
In my heart
You broke both
Caused hurt
Nearly killed me
My home is no more
And my heart is irrepairable
Comments
Thursday, 03 August 2006 01:56
I likes it...its minimalist and cool. and its the inagural 100th poem yay slice!
Thursday, 03 August 2006 23:05
I really don't see what a lot of these poems have to do with the fandom, but that could just be me.
Good work, though it could use a little more depth. I'm sure you'd be brilliant at subjects besides things like this, which other poets have already exhausted.
Keep it up, you're doing a great job and congrats on reaching 100!
Good work, though it could use a little more depth. I'm sure you'd be brilliant at subjects besides things like this, which other poets have already exhausted.
Keep it up, you're doing a great job and congrats on reaching 100!
Saturday, 05 August 2006 00:15
Hooray slice for reaching 100! I like the poem. I enjoy poety that is succinct yet creative in it's telling. You've got mad writing skills!
Saturday, 05 August 2006 18:12
Wow...100 poems...damn you're prolific;)
And I disagree with Wanmei...think these poems apply if you want them to. I can totally see this one being Mal/Inara-related, even if that wasn't Slice's point:D
BEB
And I disagree with Wanmei...think these poems apply if you want them to. I can totally see this one being Mal/Inara-related, even if that wasn't Slice's point:D
BEB
Tuesday, 08 August 2006 11:08
Congrats on 100 poems, and this one is very good, the pain from being hurt like that is definitely a deep one.
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