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Delta Rain - Torrents chapter 3

Tuesday, May 25, 2004

A brief interlude as Serenety and crew make their way to Whitefall.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 5414    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: Characters do not belong to me, they are the property of Joss Whedon, Mutant Enemy and Fox.

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Takes place shortly after the series ended and about a month after the events in Delta Rain. Long time coming for this chapter, sorry about that. Had some RL things going on, work and all that...plus one nasty case of writers block! Big thanks go out to Tori and Cassie and Jebbypal for continued swift kicks in the rear...and a speedy beta from Cassie, thanks so much!

* Quote from Delta Rain, by The Blessing

Chinese translations: Hwoon dahn: Son of a bitch

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Zoe paused in the doorway to the bridge; she loved seeing her husband like this. He'd taken a break from playing with the dinosaurs to go over some charts. Mal had asked him to plot a less direct route to Whitefall, just in case. His face was serious and calm as he hunched over the console.

Smiling serenely, she walked over and smoothed his hair down. He had a habit of running his fingers through it when he was concentrating or nervous, made it stick up kinda funny. In a cute, totally sexy way.

"Hey wife," he turned and gave her that smile that always made her feel warm and loved, seeing that smile was like finding home every time, "thought you'd gone to bed."

"Not yet," she leaned down and gave him a gentle kiss, "Mal wanted to talk some thing over. Like how to deal with Patience if that is what River has in mind."

"I'm still for the shooting her first thing." he said jokingly.

"Hardly conductive to getting her to help us, wouldn't you think?" Zoe responded with a smile, settling down next to him in her favorite spot.

"See, I'm just not seeing the whole Patience helping us out thing." a slight frown creased his brow. Zoe resisted the urge to smooth it out.

"Me either." she said softly, turning slightly so she could gaze out at the black. "I

Comments
Tuesday, 25 May 2004 06:17
I like to call this moment in the story the transitory? chapter. The middle before everything starts moving and building towards the climax/action etc. Great job, Neroli! Really, you impress me each time with that easy ability to get into the characters minds. I loved each scene in the chapter. My favorite of course, Mal/Inara. *sigh* I would love for one day to see you write a fic about those two. Even though Inara scares you. *snickers* The Zoe/Wash was sweet, you write them so well also. I envy you in that corner. Especially enjoyed the River scene, and the little insight and background of Jayne's family's through her eyes. The part about Timmie was so sad, since we know what happens to her. Jayne and Simon scene. *snickers* I loved that bit about the girlie snore. Wonderful insight about Jayne's insecurties without taking away from the Jayneness. I can't wait for the next chapter, hope your muse behaves! *shakes finger*

Bravo!
Tuesday, 25 May 2004 11:42
YEAH!!!! Another chapter from Nerolie!!! My week is complete now <sigh>.

Great job again. loved the River scene and then having Jayne hear the rain stick <even if he doesn't realize it>. Nervous for what is to come, but looking forward to seeing you post more soon!;)
Tuesday, 25 May 2004 12:56
I am itching for things to pick up speed but love how you have shown everybody coping with the time of waiting that must transpire first. Like taking a big breath in slow motion as a prelude to an outpouring of action. Good work, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 25 May 2004 13:01
Good stuff! And interestin' too. I look forward to the rest.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 28 May 2004 00:55
Well worth waiting for. Please. Please continue!
Wednesday, 02 June 2004 20:23
Okay, I know it's only been a week since you put this up, but I've just found this series and been working my way through from start to here... I need another hit! More please!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 18 March 2005 10:19
love it once again wonderful work when's the next chapter? omg i love ur work it is so kooland i love it
cant wait till the next chapter
lol jazz
Friday, 02 September 2005 19:12
where is it? where's the next part? HUH?!? I'M GOING INTO WITHDRAWAL HERE!!!

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